Can't Possibly Take This Seriously

[Chicklet]

I received this feedback for my "romantic" story, from an annonymous reader. Can anyone take these ideas seriously, well, maybe the second one, but the first one? Good lord, this is the second oddest thing I've ever received in the mail. 1st being "thank you for sparing me the pain of having to see your face"

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please write of young girls who humilate
their younger brothers' by sitting on
their faces and sometime farting and ur-
inating. Also about blacks who sit on
the chests,necks and heads of unwilling,
at first, young white virgins and teach
them to like black penises and sperm.

 

[Dragon Dreamer]

lol, that's funny.

Better than me though, I have yet to recieve one piece of feedback mail.

 

[Chicklet]

Feedback

I haven't received very much feedback for my fetish story, and I haven't written a gay male story yet, but I imagine that it's not one of the most read categories. Anyways, it's probably not your writing, it's just that out of 1000 views you'll probably get 2 votes, and out of 30 votes you'll probably get 2 feedbacks, so don't feel bad about it = )

Chicklet

 

[sirhugs]

I hope it wasn't " Taboo Trek" they were trashing- I LOVED that story- it left me wanting more, a sure sign it was good. Also, ahem, getting down to the gritty, I'd already cum before reading it, and it stil stirred my loins.

Never doubt your talent. Just know there are weirdos on Lit. Decide for yourself if I'm one of them.

 

[Chicklet]

Taboo Trek

I'm glad you liked it; it's not doing nearly as well as my other stories. It was my first go at incest, I wasn't really sure if it worked out or not = )

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Taboo Trek

I'm glad you liked it; it's not doing nearly as well as my other stories. It was my first go at incest, I wasn't really sure if it worked out or not = )

it was so real I wondered whether it was reality based- it had everything- character, dialogue, and narrative, nice plot, cool ending, plus you can read it onehanded!

Maybe I'm just biased . although I never have had incest experience* irl, the stories often are the hottest for me. Your romanctic stories I can admire as finely written, but they don't have as much erotic impact for me. I confess only having read about 1/3 of your work so far, so may have not read the best.

*honesty footnote: I have fantacized about blowjobs from my now 22 yr old stepdaughter, but if you saw her mouth you would too!

 

[Chicklet]

None of my work (save the humor story, which states it was true) is based on any real experience. Believe it or not I have rather straight sexual experience = ) It's fun, but it's rather mainstream. I've been a part of a couple threesomes, but nothing I'd write about. Some of the actual sex comes from stuff I've tried, but the stories...pure fiction = ) = )

glad you liked it, though.

I think my best stuff is the Twin's stories...

Chicklet

 

[oogieboogie]

Out of the loop

What are your stories and what was the suggestion you got ?
Sorry got here late.

 

[Chicklet]

I received this feedback for my "romantic" story, from an annonymous reader. Can anyone take these ideas seriously, well, maybe the second one, but the first one? Good lord, this is the second oddest thing I've ever received in the mail. 1st being "thank you for sparing me the pain of having to see your face"

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please write of young girls who humilate
their younger brothers' by sitting on
their faces and sometime farting and ur-
inating. Also about blacks who sit on
the chests,necks and heads of unwilling,
at first, young white virgins and teach
them to like black penises and sperm.

girls farting on their younger brothers faces? Yum yum yum...

 

[oogieboogie]

Re: Re: Can't Possibly Take This Seriously

girls farting on their younger brothers faces? Yum yum yum...

What ??? Thats a problem ??

Oh my, thats quite the request. eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwww

 

[Chicklet]

uhm, yeah, i was like "uh huuuuhhh...suuuuure i'll write it....soon as i get a lobotomy and my brain turns to mush"

 

[sirhugs]

uhm, yeah, i was like "uh huuuuhhh...suuuuure i'll write it....soon as i get a lobotomy and my brain turns to mush"

LoL

you slay me

 

[Dragon Dreamer]

Well, I just submitted my third story, this one is more straight 1 on 1 m/f stuff, so we'll see what happens... lol.

 

[oogieboogie]

uhm, yeah, i was like "uh huuuuhhh...suuuuure i'll write it....soon as i get a lobotomy and my brain turns to mush"

Just put one of those hand blenders in your ear and turn it on. Same results, but faster.

 

[sirhugs]

and right before supper!
but even that has a silver lining- my sick mind went from there to Ray Liotta's brain being fried in Hannibal to Julianne Moore, to lower brain stem dominated activity( ie stirring loins)

 

[Chicklet]

oh dear

 

[oogieboogie]

oh dear

See what happens when you leave ??

 

[sirhugs]

I'm baaaaaaack....

 

[sirhugs]

oh, chicklet, our vixen of the vinyards, time to clean out your pm box!

read twin's revenge- welll, honestly, got through first chapter and part of chapter 2- I came just as he blew in her mouth, coincidence? then my 10 yr old called wanting to wash the car, so the timing was really good. Hope the graphic detail is nmot offensive, not intended so, but I'm not one to pretend erotica isn't at least partly about self-relief, so on that level, these stories are hot. I continue to admire your combination of character, plot and dialogue- I can picture the scenes like a movie.

 

[PhxPlay4n6]

I liked the story! For a first try at incest, it was well-written and didn't fall into the cliches of most incest stories...as for the feedback, it was probably serious...from someone seriously fucked up. Oh well, whatever floats your boat...

 

[MasterDJs_pet]

Speaking of feedback...

Chicklet, I wanted to mention that a little while back I got a "feedback" letter saying:

You have nice tits Chicklet.

I mailed the person back stating I was not you. I got a second letter back saying:

I'm sure you have nice tits too.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Speaking of feedback...

Chicklet, I wanted to mention that a little while back I got a "feedback" letter saying:



I mailed the person back stating I was not you. I got a second letter back saying:

well, pet, we KNOW chicklet has nice tits ( see her Tasty New Thread in Amateur Pics ). how about yours?

 

[MasterDJs_pet]

well, pet, we KNOW chicklet has nice tits ( see her Tasty New Thread in Amateur Pics ). how about yours?

People who have been on this site even 6 months or longer know what my tits look like and "where" they can find them.

 

[Chicklet]

Feedback?!

You got feedback complimenting my tits? I don't know whether to laugh or cry, Tiggs.

I'm dreadfully sorry about it, anyway. Stupid of them not to notice who they were writing to, eh?

(yes, tiggs does have nice tits, sirhugs)

 

[SexyChele]

Chicklet, I got almost the same exact feedback! Well, the part about a girl sitting on her brother's face and farting, that is. It grossed me out so much, that I just deleted. Not even sure which story they were looking at, if any.

Maybe some one is making the rounds?