Candi begging for critiques

[CandiCame]

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c280/takocos/my_art/adult/sketch_female_zpsd1fa3c0f-1.jpg

For some reason my photobucket stuff never wants to show up, so let me know if these are even visible. But yeah, I'd really appreciate any help/tips/whatnot.

 

[THROBBS]

Welcome aboard.

not sure your goal..so difficult to critique.

Looks fun. Looks like anime influence. Looks hairy. None of which is "critique", just observations.

The very dark arrow shape bellybutton (I think) is a bit distracting. How's that?

 

[tolyk]

Welcome aboard.

not sure your goal..so difficult to critique.

Looks fun. Looks like anime influence. Looks hairy. None of which is "critique", just observations.

The very dark arrow shape bellybutton (I think) is a bit distracting. How's that?

Echoing throbbs comment about the arrow shaped belly button.

 

[snugglestruggle]

I'll start by saying I have no talent for drawing whatsoever. This is my 2 cents..

I like the face alot. It feels...strong like your hand knew exactly what the mind wanted on paper. The rest of the drawing..seems like you were not so sure the lines not as well defined. But what do I know? Keep at it everything improves with practice

 

[CandiCame]

Thanks so much for everyone's responses. I'll be posting more on the hope that I'm improving with the suggestions!! This one definately doesn't have a dark, distracting belly button!!

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c280/takocos/my_art/adult/sketch_male_zpsb1ede7d9-1.jpg

 

[alwaysaboutsex]

I like them.

As far as critiquing goes, the eyes in the first one are in different places which makes me go a little cross-eyed, but I can forgive that seeing where her tongue is. They are both really fun and I'm excited to see what you turn out next.

 

[CandiCame]

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs27/i/2008/182/1/c/Link_and_Xandir_by_takocos.jpg