Can you say Cloates, anyone? -closed for Intensityrising

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Can you say Cloates, anyone? now open for a lady

The music pounded out of the speakers. Rex squints his eyes at the bright strobe light bathes over him and moves on searching for another victim or dancers. He makes his way through the throngs of partiers and player. Finding a single seat in a far dark corner of the club was a blessing.

Circus Party House(CPH) is the happeningist club in the sector. Top entertainers came here to move their career along. Singers, dancers, acts large and small made a stop at, CPH. Creatures from all over the galaxy made Cloates a must see stop on any mission or adventure. Star cruiser services, rates the planet Cloates, in the top 10 must see places, in the galaxy. As long as you have credits. No socks, no shirt, no credits; no service.

Cloates also has a dark side. Allong with the partiers and funseeker are the criminal elements that lurked in the shadows. In the outer borrows of the communitees, thieves and bandits lay in wait for the truely lost and those looking to not be found. Forged documents could be had for a price. Names changed in secret places. Even defrocked preists and unlicenced doctors preformed services in out of the way places. So while, Cloates promoted a wholesome picture of funloving pleasure palaces. The truth about the planet is hidden from the outside world. Cloates is safe, Cloates is fun...Cloates could get you killed if you were unwary.

Rex is on a mission. As a agent for the Republic of Planets he is listed as a bonded bounty hunter. Permited to seek out wanted criminals anywhere in the galaxy. This means he was not a officer of the law. Although he does have the power of arrest. He served above the law. And all the time acting as a space merchant. Yes, Rex Lionheart is a traveling salesman, on a mission.

The mission is interstellular. Two 'guests' had been killed. The hotel they were staying in was booked solid. Not a room to be had. Four cruise lines with thousands of visitors poured though the entry gates to see the sights. Two never made it back to their home worlds. Now you might say, out of all the thousands of tourists that came to Cloates, the loss of just two is not all that bad. Barely a thing to even concern a galactic goverment. And you would of been right, except for one thing. They were Neons.

I guess at this point, I should tell you the truth. While all planets have value some stand out more so then others. The planet NEON is one of these special planets. A very secret society. Male Neons are rarely seen. Neon male merchants are concidered in polite society to be just above criminals. To leave the hearth and home was frowned on. A man's place, is next to his woman. The woman went out and made the credits. Men are allowed to work from the home and were urged to do so as soon as the passed their last classes of home schooling.

Neon is home and you better stay home. If you know what is good for you.

Most Neons are shades of yellow or orange. Yellows are not profession entertianers. They are on the younger side 18-22 years old. Yellows are considered travelers or students permited to leave the planet to study away from the home world. Very fun loving, they love fun sex, fun dancing and overall just fun stuff.

The Neons function under very strick laws. Orange neons are domestics and marry at the 'right age' they do the 'right thing'. Male Orange neons don't leave the planet. Well unless they have credits. Very rich males may take jobs as diplomates. The not so rich, well, as merchants. Very few are allowed to travel and those that do are tinted yellow. NONE are blue. They work on the home planet or outer moons. And merchants may not travel beyond the outer moons. The moons are the outer most ring of outposts that they may go. And then only to trade.

And then we come to the 'bad' neons. The Proes, the offies, the off worlders. The undesirable ones. When they announce, and they must under the law. That they are going to be pofessional entertainer. And they must do so publicly. They are changed bio-chemically to blue. This means they can never go back to their home planet. Because they have sold themselves. They are the ladies of the night, in the galaxy.

Rex is here to see a Blue. A dancer named, Halo. A very talented dancer and of course sex giver. Professional Neons make big money 10-12 thousand credits a night. The sex trade pays big. And Neons are in top demand by men from time to time. But its the ladies that pay the most. Two thousand credits a session is average. If they bring their daughters the price can double or triple. So a Neon's time is very exspensive.
 
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