Can you critique me?

Well, for one thing, post what kind of co-writer and your idea here rather than in the general role playing section. That link takes you to the thread seeking role play partners for existing role play stories.

Most people looking to write something check there to see if anything interests them. By the time most story posts get made in the main role play section, they usually are closed to a certain co-writer, so probably not too many people realize your story idea is available.

My other suggestion is that sometimes it takes longer than a few hours to get a response. You posted several replies to your own story within moments, and maybe that is intimidating people. Post your idea for a story in the thread I linked above and be patient. People will contact you if they are interested.

A word of advice. You have already posted a few posts that will serve as your writing sample of how you write and about what length of posts you expect. That's good. But you might want to vett your prospective writing partners too by checking out something they have written before you agree to write with them. This will make sure your writing experiences are as enjoyable as you can make them. Even the best idea can be disappointing if your partner doesn't meet your expectations.

You might also want to make out a post in the SRP Profiles section at the top of this Lounge section. Then link it in your signature. This let's people know what kind of things turn you on, what you expect from co-writers, what you will and will not do, etc.

Good luck. :rose:
 
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