Can somebody help write this for us?

[bigdog76]

Hello, my gf and I would like to find somebody to write a story for us. We have the plot(sort of) but we don't have the skills to really make the story come to life. Rachel(Rach) and I(Rich) really like the stories on here that refer to guys watching their gf/wife with other men, particularly the ones where the guy follows the girl into the a bar/night club, sits at a table in the corner or across the bar, and pretends to be a stranger. He then watches as guys come onto his gf and they flirt and dance and well, you know how those stories go. What we want, is the reverse of that. Rach wants to read a story where she follows me in a bar and sits and watches me get hit on and such. Can somebody write that? We would really appreciate it

Rich is 33 5'7 white shaved head. Athletic body Rach is 30 white 5'6 also athletic body

Thank you so much!

R R

 

[soflabbwlvr]

I'm having a deja vu.

 

[bigdog76]

Yeah you are. We had someone agree to do it for us, but they don't respond to our emails and its been 3 weeks or so..So we are re-posting it in hopes that somebody will actually do it for us...Can anyone help?

 

[Michael_Lane]

It can take some time to come up with a well written story, especially if you have other projects ongoing.
I can typically get about 500 keepable words done a day, but as a part time writer I only get to work a couple of days a week, so you can see how the time gets away from you quickly.
I'll add your idea to the top of my project list and check back here when it's done. It'll be end of next month at the earliest, but it'll be worth the wait.

 

[lustatopia]

I could write it but won't, because it would never pass the suspension of disbelief test. Sure, I can see a hot babe digging the idea of her boyfriend watching her flaunt her stuff, make-out with and eventually pick up some stud at a night club, because that sort of thing goes on all the time and makes guys hot as hell.

But the other way around? Rather unlikely. You know why? Because women, even if they are bisexual are just too darn jealous to let a good man roll out into play like that. Beside even the studliest guys can't just roll into a club and snap get surrounded by a gang of drooling babes. Any rockin' bitch can do that on a Monday night.

When shit like that does happen it is always the guy's idea and the babe is somehow too intimated or too indentured to his cash flow to protest. Bi chicks like to have an "understanding" with their girlfriends before sharing their men. It's a tribal thing that has to do with status, ie alpha female control.

The reason why guys can more easily share their women with strange men than the other way around has to do with human nature. A guy (or two) can easily help out a bro satisfy his lady without a lot of emotional baggage dragged into the fun. A woman, even if bi, is going to find her stud's sexual attention grabbed by a strange wench totally threatening. But I suppose if totally threatening jealousy is your thing, then.... Who am I to say?