can some1 help me with my celeb story

John said:
iam 19years my story idea is Sandra Bullock walk naked in store try get detergent... i need help next

why is she naked? why does she need detergent?
who is in the store?
once you answer those, visit agasin if " what happens next?" does not pop out at you.
 
John said:
she ran out of detergent when she was doing Laundry.. my problem what should happen next.....


Get one of her many "people" to go buy her some...Like she even does her own clothing.


Ravin
 
Ravin the Poet said:
Get one of her many "people" to go buy her some...Like she even does her own clothing.


Ravin

I'm still waiting to find out why she's naked

though if she walked into a store I was in, I think my brain might be suffering from blood loss so badly I wouldn't care....
 
oh..thats right..texas has such a huge detergent shortage and all..people have to sell their clothes for it
 
John said:
she is from texas...she ran out of detergent


Ok we got that point. So what else. So far you got

-> Sandra
-> Naked
-> Laundry Mat
-> Out of soap

Ok, so you got a why (she needs to do wash) but answer the why...why is she naked and didn't put clothing on. WHy she pick that time, that place. You also need to think of the things you want to happen while she is. Plus, who else is there and what are they doing.

You ask for help, when really you need to put more thought into it. Someone can't just tell you how YOU want the story to turn out.

Ravin
 
maybe you start by being shocked SSandra is at such a plebian place, but first- why is she naked?
 
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