Can I have a story withdrawn?

CardinalX

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I recently posted a story named "Room Service", but when I read the online version through I saw that some words were changed from my own copy. I think it´s because the version I posted was a version another guy had edited for me, and he must have deleted some words accidentally and replaced them with what he thought it was supposed to say, so now it reads "anxiously" instead of "awaitingly" and "mom" instead of "mmm", among a few other things, could I have the story withdrawn so I can get those mistakes corrected?
 
Actually, the best thing to do is correct the revisions and resubmit the story as "Room Service--EDITED". Laurel will replace the current copy with your revised text.

Awaitingly is not a word. Try expectantly or in anticipation. Leaving out -ly words as much as possible is a good thing.
 
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