Can en editor please explain...

[trixiej]

Why my latest submission to Literotica, which a unicorn, was rejected? If you cannot access rejected stories I am happy to email it to anyone who can help.

Yours fuming,

Trixiej

 

[THE_TRUE_GOD]

Go to your "Submissions" list and click on "Rejected". That will tell you why. If it does say "Bestiality" then repost with a note to the Editor explaining that unicorns do not exist.

 

[trixiej]

Thank you Mr Truegod... i will try that tho i was assuming whoever rejected the story already knew that!

x

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Thank you Mr Truegod... i will try that tho i was assuming whoever rejected the story already knew that!

It could be because of something else...

Those long page breaks or cum scenes can do it... you know these:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I"M CUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMG!!!"

<grin>

 

[CopyCarver]

It could be because of something else...

Those long page breaks or cum scenes can do it... you know these:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I"M CUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMG!!!"

<grin>

Um, yeah. No offense to you or your story, but a good line edit would produce big benefits.

 

[trixiej]

lol ... well i don't remember having any of those in there!! (they were unwritten, all in the mind). Is there a technical term for them??

i also belatedly noticed that a couple of story tags that i had overlooked were, um, contentious. so i've deleted them too in resubmitting...

 

[clive522]

I doubt whether they would know or understand what a Unicorn was !!!
With "generic" rejections they add nothing and in the main are totally unhelpful

 

[THE_TRUE_GOD]

I see that you finally got A Girl's Best Friend posted.

 

[kbate]

Having now read the story in question, I understand the original rejection and fully agree that rejection was warranted.

No attempt was made to create a fantastic setting in which sex with a 'unicorn' would be a normal or even an abnormal occurance. No references to equine, horse, hoofs, horn, coat, bridle, halter. anything.

The word dog was replaced with unicorn, in order to pass the story off as non-human.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

The word dog was replaced with unicorn, in order to pass the story off as non-human.

I'm surprised they ok-ed this... even with the switch... it's so obviously not a unicorn :x I think readers in non-human are gonna be a little unhappy... the premise doesn't lend itself to the fantastic... the clearly dog-like "unicorn" stands out like a piece of chewing gum stuck in the face of the Mona Lisa there I dunno how a re-write would have worked... but you need to somehow suspend a reader's disbelief, and my belief was definitely not suspended!