can anyone help write this story.

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I'm looking for someone to write a story about a step dad that gets fed up with his family disrespecting him and finally decides to teach them a lesson. I would want him to hire a large group of well endowed black gang bangers to break into his home while he was at work but the rest of the family would be home.
. The gang would have specific instructions to follow, such as 1. They have to video record the whole thing. 2. The gang could do whatever was necessary for them to secure the entire family. 3. They would be required to text the dad once they were in the house and had everyone confined to one room.
. Once the dad got the text saying they were in and ready, he would come home. He would act surprised at first, then be taken into a separate room, where he would pay them the rest of their money. The dad soul then strip naked and redress in an outfit made up of his daughters lingerie, before reentering the room where his family was being held.
. The story would then progress from their. If you would lil to help me write this story please contact me and we can work out the details. Thank you and have a perverted day.
 
I don't really see where a story would go from there. The father wants his family's respect, so he hires a black gang to terrorize them so that he can show up in the room they've been put in in a pink tutu? This is supposed to lead to his family gaining respect for him?

Will be watching to see if anyone else can make it into a viable storyline.
 
I think....you posted this once before and it was removed due to the original idea being the father paid the gang to rape and torture the family and film it then he shows up and watches the video and see them raped and tortured more.

This is the watered down version of that idea. I don't recall the tutu though....interesting plot twist.
 
I don't really see where a story would go from there. The father wants his family's respect, so he hires a black gang to terrorize them so that he can show up in the room they've been put in in a pink tutu? This is supposed to lead to his family gaining respect for him?
If Dad's goal is respect, then after the gang terrorizes and rapes the family, Dad should appear with an Uzi and smear the malefactors. Now he's the badass who saved everyone. Sure, he could wear "an outfit made up of his daughters [sic] lingerie" while he's blasting the BBCs into bloody bits. I guess that symbolizes his reconnection with his inner Bonnie Parker or something. And, while the family is tied up amongst the BBC corpses, Dad puts the Nutcracker on the stereo and dances his interpretation of "life in the ruins". His family is so overwhelmed and terrorized by his insanity that they swear to never again dis or argue with him. When he releases them, they all head for the hills. Dad cackles; he hid GPS beacons in their shoes, so he knows where to find them. Hilarity ensues.
 
So, you're saying an erotic story can't be written on this? :D
 
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