sack
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- Jul 29, 2003
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Over the last few months, I've consistenly shook my head at the stories that have gotten "E"s. There seems to be a trend toward the weird, the "shocker" type story, and more alarmingly, the poorly written. One story featured the following:
26 incomplete sentences/sentence fragments (I'm not exaggerating)
4 incorrect tenses
2 misspelled words
1 stray quotation mark
2 words with letters missing
2 cases where the wrong word was chosen, giving a completely different spin on the story
awkward paragraphs
And the storyline was just OK, not earth shattering in any way. Compare this with an impeccably edited story such as J.T. Malone's latest one or Penny's winning Halloween contest Magician entry which did not get "E"s. Only a complete ignoramus could not see the obvious difference in quality. I don't understand what message Laurel and Manu is giving out here...that a poorly edited story doesn't really matter and that overall presentation means nothing? Yes, some of these "E" stories were quite original...but originality alone does not a great story make. Perhaps Laurel and Manu are tired of reading about sex, as I noticed in many of the recent "E" stories sex is downplayed, if not completely absent. Anyone have other ideas about this? Oddly enough the "E" poems are mostly of higher quality, makes you wonder if Manu picks the poems and Laurel
picks the stories.
Hmmmm......
26 incomplete sentences/sentence fragments (I'm not exaggerating)
4 incorrect tenses
2 misspelled words
1 stray quotation mark
2 words with letters missing
2 cases where the wrong word was chosen, giving a completely different spin on the story
awkward paragraphs
And the storyline was just OK, not earth shattering in any way. Compare this with an impeccably edited story such as J.T. Malone's latest one or Penny's winning Halloween contest Magician entry which did not get "E"s. Only a complete ignoramus could not see the obvious difference in quality. I don't understand what message Laurel and Manu is giving out here...that a poorly edited story doesn't really matter and that overall presentation means nothing? Yes, some of these "E" stories were quite original...but originality alone does not a great story make. Perhaps Laurel and Manu are tired of reading about sex, as I noticed in many of the recent "E" stories sex is downplayed, if not completely absent. Anyone have other ideas about this? Oddly enough the "E" poems are mostly of higher quality, makes you wonder if Manu picks the poems and Laurel
picks the stories.
Hmmmm......