Calling all Ass Lovers

[Guest]

Writing a little rimming scene for my story, but it's one of those disgustingly romantic type stories and I just can't bring myself to say:

"He flicked his tongue delicately, fluttering down the base of her spine. His beard ticked the cheeks of her bottom deliciously as he travelled further down. He paused for a moment to inhale the scent he loved, savoring it like a fine wine, before dipping his tongue in her asshole..."

This guy really digs assholes - kay? But is there something else I can call it? Asshole doesn't do it for me at all. Pucker is too harsh. Orifice too cold. The *star shaped _____* has been done too much.

Someone thow an idea or two my way, pretty please?

 

[Guest]

tightest hole

crinkled hole

sensitive hole

Any of these work?

 

[rgraham666]

My first thought on seeing this thread was 'Ask sarahh.'

 

[Guest]

tightest hole

crinkled hole

sensitive hole

Any of these work?

Why thank you sss.

I think it's the "hole" part that I don't like. But nice adjectives. I like "crinkled".

 

[Guest]

My first thought on seeing this thread was 'Ask sarahh.'

She was in like a dirty shirt.(thank you again, sweet)
The forum expert, I presume?

 

[MarshAlien]

Why thank you sss.

I think it's the "hole" part that I don't like. But nice adjectives. I like "crinkled".

Crinkled opening?

 

[Guest]

Crinkled opening?

I guess there just aren't that many words, eh?

Thank you, Marsh.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Not what you were asking exactly, but when I see it like that - asshole, one word - the furthest thing from my mind is the actual hole of the ass. Another reason why you should reconsider it, I guess.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Writing a little rimming scene for my story, but it's one of those disgustingly romantic type stories and I just can't bring myself to say:

"He flicked his tongue delicately, fluttering down the base of her spine. His beard ticked the cheeks of her bottom deliciously as he travelled further down. He paused for a moment to inhale the scent he loved, savoring it like a fine wine, before dipping his tongue in her asshole..."

This guy really digs assholes - kay? But is there something else I can call it? Asshole doesn't do it for me at all. Pucker is too harsh. Orifice too cold. The *star shaped _____* has been done too much.

Someone thow an idea or two my way, pretty please?

Maybe just say 'ass' and then go on with your description, using the term 'hole' or 'opening'. That's usually about what I do; I am way against 'pucker' and 'rosebud'. If you say he's licking her ass or her behind, there won't be any confusion as to what hole he's all up in.

 

[Guest]

My first thought on seeing this thread was 'Ask sarahh.'

Snert. (You write one how-to story . . .)

I like tightest hole - it seems more romantic to me, less "dirty" in the story.

I've used crinkle as a noun, too.

 

[rgraham666]

She was in like a dirty shirt.(thank you again, sweet)
The forum expert, I presume?

She's the one I always ask for information on that particular subject.

Wrote a good How To on the subject as well.

 

[Guest]

Jee-sus - and to think I was going to post this on the GB.

*smacks myself upside the head*

It's nice here - I should hang out here more often.

Thank you Lauren, OhMissScarlett, Mr. Devil..

You guys are fabulous.

Yeah - "rosebud" has been done to death. And I will check out the How to, RG.

 

[Guest]

Well, it's good that you're here.

You may get more help than you wish from the GB.

And also certain un-helpful descriptors like "bung hole" and "hershey highway" and other assorted niceties.



Kisses, Rob.

 

[Guest]

Well, it's good that you're here.

You may get more help than you wish from the GB.

And also certain helpful descriptors like "bung hole" and "hershey highway" and other assorted niceties.

It's a very bad addiction - My name is babygrrl and I am powerless over the GB.

YOU are sweet. I like the idea of "crinkle" as a noun. May I?

 

[Guest]

It's a very bad addiction - My name is babygrrl and I am powerless over the GB.

YOU are sweet. I like the idea of "crinkle" as a noun. May I?

Of course - I probably saw it somewhere else myself.

Good luck!

 

[tickledkitty]

Okay, I'm probably way off base here. It's the voice of inexperience. I know clinical terms don't usually sound very sexy, butt (he he) since you're trying to be somewhat polite in your description, how about calling a spade a spade and just saying anus?

 

[Guest]

Okay, I'm probably way off base here. It's the voice of inexperience. I know clinical terms don't usually sound very sexy, butt (he he) since you're trying to be somewhat polite in your description, how about calling a spade a spade and just saying anus?

You're not off base at all, Kitty - I appreciate your opinion. Sometimes the clinical can be very nice. The feel of this scene is a little on the playful side, so I'm less inclined for this particular word. I've got "crinkle" in there ATM and it's working well.

I do appreciate your putting your two cents. As for inexperience, there's nothing wrong with that whatsoever.

 

[impressive]

Yeah - "rosebud" has been done to death.

And, really, I've never seen one that reminded me of a rosebud. At. All.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

And, really, I've never seen one that reminded me of a rosebud. At. All.

me either. if I did, I'd probably wonder if they were sitting on traffic cones a lot.

Well, then there's the whole Citizen Kane thing. If it looks like a sled...RUN.

 

[WRJames]

Here is what I did in "Kiss My Ass" (although I do use "asshole" in the paragraph preceding this one)

Lips? Kiss my ass. That’s what Adam would snarl at one of the boys when they made a suggestion he didn’t like. And now, that’s what Sarah was asking her to do. God, it was strange, like a little puckered mouth. And then it opened, and she was French kissing. No tongue to meet hers, just a smooth, muscular shaft, hard to push through.

 

[tickledkitty]

"Rosebud" always reminds me of Citizen Kane too. It'll jerk me right out of the story.