Pure
Fiel a Verdad
- Joined
- Dec 20, 2001
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Got a story?
Is it not quite polished or satisfactory to you, even though it might be posted?
Do you want detailed feedback and suggestions *as to the writing, how the actions unfolds, how the characters appear, etc.*
I am not referring to help with punctuation and spelling and teaching what a sentence is.
IF you can wait a week or two, and you don't mind talking to others in the same boat. And you are articulate about what you see, and what you like, in a story. That is, you are capable of being helpful to other writers. (As contrasted with "I love/hate your work.")
THEN visit the 'sticky' first thread in the Story Discussion Circle and give your particulars.
There are several excellent critics and writers hanging around, in no particular order, Rumple, Black Tulip, Black Shanglan, carsonshepherd and other equally accomplished persons of 'black' temperament.
J.
Is it not quite polished or satisfactory to you, even though it might be posted?
Do you want detailed feedback and suggestions *as to the writing, how the actions unfolds, how the characters appear, etc.*
I am not referring to help with punctuation and spelling and teaching what a sentence is.
IF you can wait a week or two, and you don't mind talking to others in the same boat. And you are articulate about what you see, and what you like, in a story. That is, you are capable of being helpful to other writers. (As contrasted with "I love/hate your work.")
THEN visit the 'sticky' first thread in the Story Discussion Circle and give your particulars.
There are several excellent critics and writers hanging around, in no particular order, Rumple, Black Tulip, Black Shanglan, carsonshepherd and other equally accomplished persons of 'black' temperament.
J.
