melusine
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Did you ever write a letter and cram it into a bottle and cast it into the ocean wondering about who would find it?
Since I am new and have no clue what I am doing, you can consider this thread to be a cyber version of the above. The beginning of the story is the message.
What I am wondering is, will anyone find and read the message? And if they do, will they answer?
And who will it be?
~~
On days when it rained and no one stopped to watch her dance, Armande wondered if there were angels watching her, and if they shed tears to see her so bedraggled and hopeful, with her scuffed shoes tied with red bows.
The painted bowl beside her on the pavement today was full of rainwater, not coins. She hoped Madame Béroul was with her sister. Otherwise, it would be a hungry, wet night.
Armande was eighteen years old, but looked younger, having lived most her life on a diet of bread and stolen apples and weak, cold tea. She was lanky and skinny, and when she was naked the bones of her shoulders stood out like nascent wings. Men liked to kiss her there, or stroke the fine bones as she sat astride them. "It's like fucking an angel with broken wings," one of them had said. Her face helped the illusion too. Nothing had ever taken the innocence away.
There were men on the street who offered her more because she looked so much like a little girl. Some of them were kind and bought her chocolates afterwards, feeding her like a kitten. They could be almost chivalrous, after they had had their hands up her knickers. Some of them were frightening though, with cold hands and a furtive way of never meeting anyone's eyes on the street. She did not go with men like that. She could see darkness when it squirmed like a lizard behind mens' eyes. Or maybe the angels who watched her saw, and made sure not to let her come to harm.
The going with men had never been part of the original plan. She had thought that she could get enough just by begging and dancing. It was not real dancing, of course. Not anything you took lessons for. It was something that came out of her heart when she thought the world was especially ugly and needed "smartening up." On the best days, Serge played his tinwhistle, and she had the resultant music as her partner in the dance. But that was seldom now. Serge did not often wake up before nightfall anymore, and by then she had to be gone. The police were vigilant at night.
"Don't go with those men anymore," Serge would say to her sometimes. And she thought there was nothing sadder than the look in his eyes when he felt in his empty pockets for something to give her and had to come up with nothing. "If I could I would empty a bowl of silver coins on the street where you danced. Every step you took would be on a road of silver."
"And you would let me keep them afterwards?" Armande asked. "All of those silver coins?"
"All of them. Well...all of them after you bought me some cigarettes."
Serge was a street boy. He had no home to go to. Where he slept was anybody's guess. He always gave his address as "somewhere between here and heaven." Which maybe was why Armande thought so much about angels. Serge seemed to know a lot about them. He talked to them sometimes. But that was on the worst days, when he was slumped beneath some dirty newspapers on somebody's unwashed stoop, and his hair stuck up around his head like bolts of black and crackling fire.
The worst days for Serge were always after the times when Armande had caught the eye of a man who waited for her on the street corner until she gave up dancing for the day, and took her hand, and led her away to perform for him more privately.
She had a way of making people happy; everyone said that about her. The baker gave her an extra brioche sometimes "because you brought me sunshine, Armande."
Men, a lot of lonely men, bought sunshine from Armande. Not every day. Just sometimes. The baker had been the first. He was not a particularly good customer though, because his wife did not often leave him alone in the shop, and even if she did, she counted every loaf when she got back. Only one day in the week, she went out for the day to visit her sister, and then Armande would ascend to the attic with Monsieur Béroul, and perch demurely on the edge of an upended trunk, and let him bury his red, adoring face between her young and milk white thighs.
She hoped that it would happen today. Or that something would. She was hungry, and Serge was nowhere to be found. Not that Serge ever had much to offer her anymore. Not like the early days when he had been able to steal whole sausages. They used to sit under the bridge and share, bite for bite.
Armande shivered and tried to draw her black cotton stockings further up her thighs. The rain overflowed her bowl. In the bakery it would be so blissfully warm. She decided to go and look through the window, to see if she could catch Monsieur Béroul's eye.
No one paid much attention to her as she made her way over the cobblestoned street. Rainwater seeped in through the paper-thin soles of her shoes. The wind made her skirt skirl upwards. She wrapped her arms around herself and pressed her nose against the glass of the bakery window hopefully, just in front of the huge plate of chocolate cream buns that she dreamed of sometimes, but had never tasted.
Inside there was no sign of Monsieur Béroul at all, and Armande's heart sank. Where could he have gone to? Was he ill? Surely today, Wednesday, he would invite her in?
"You! Dirty beggar! Get away from my shop!"
Madame Béroul descended on her so quickly that Armande hardly had time to get away before the long tail of her hair was pulled out by the roots.
She ran, and it seemed to her that the angels were not watching over her as they ought to be. No Monsieur Béroul. No Serge. No one at all.
And then a hand gripped her arm, and she looked up into a face she had never seen before.
http://www.mythagoria.com/armande.jpg
Since I am new and have no clue what I am doing, you can consider this thread to be a cyber version of the above. The beginning of the story is the message.
What I am wondering is, will anyone find and read the message? And if they do, will they answer?
And who will it be?
~~
On days when it rained and no one stopped to watch her dance, Armande wondered if there were angels watching her, and if they shed tears to see her so bedraggled and hopeful, with her scuffed shoes tied with red bows.
The painted bowl beside her on the pavement today was full of rainwater, not coins. She hoped Madame Béroul was with her sister. Otherwise, it would be a hungry, wet night.
Armande was eighteen years old, but looked younger, having lived most her life on a diet of bread and stolen apples and weak, cold tea. She was lanky and skinny, and when she was naked the bones of her shoulders stood out like nascent wings. Men liked to kiss her there, or stroke the fine bones as she sat astride them. "It's like fucking an angel with broken wings," one of them had said. Her face helped the illusion too. Nothing had ever taken the innocence away.
There were men on the street who offered her more because she looked so much like a little girl. Some of them were kind and bought her chocolates afterwards, feeding her like a kitten. They could be almost chivalrous, after they had had their hands up her knickers. Some of them were frightening though, with cold hands and a furtive way of never meeting anyone's eyes on the street. She did not go with men like that. She could see darkness when it squirmed like a lizard behind mens' eyes. Or maybe the angels who watched her saw, and made sure not to let her come to harm.
The going with men had never been part of the original plan. She had thought that she could get enough just by begging and dancing. It was not real dancing, of course. Not anything you took lessons for. It was something that came out of her heart when she thought the world was especially ugly and needed "smartening up." On the best days, Serge played his tinwhistle, and she had the resultant music as her partner in the dance. But that was seldom now. Serge did not often wake up before nightfall anymore, and by then she had to be gone. The police were vigilant at night.
"Don't go with those men anymore," Serge would say to her sometimes. And she thought there was nothing sadder than the look in his eyes when he felt in his empty pockets for something to give her and had to come up with nothing. "If I could I would empty a bowl of silver coins on the street where you danced. Every step you took would be on a road of silver."
"And you would let me keep them afterwards?" Armande asked. "All of those silver coins?"
"All of them. Well...all of them after you bought me some cigarettes."
Serge was a street boy. He had no home to go to. Where he slept was anybody's guess. He always gave his address as "somewhere between here and heaven." Which maybe was why Armande thought so much about angels. Serge seemed to know a lot about them. He talked to them sometimes. But that was on the worst days, when he was slumped beneath some dirty newspapers on somebody's unwashed stoop, and his hair stuck up around his head like bolts of black and crackling fire.
The worst days for Serge were always after the times when Armande had caught the eye of a man who waited for her on the street corner until she gave up dancing for the day, and took her hand, and led her away to perform for him more privately.
She had a way of making people happy; everyone said that about her. The baker gave her an extra brioche sometimes "because you brought me sunshine, Armande."
Men, a lot of lonely men, bought sunshine from Armande. Not every day. Just sometimes. The baker had been the first. He was not a particularly good customer though, because his wife did not often leave him alone in the shop, and even if she did, she counted every loaf when she got back. Only one day in the week, she went out for the day to visit her sister, and then Armande would ascend to the attic with Monsieur Béroul, and perch demurely on the edge of an upended trunk, and let him bury his red, adoring face between her young and milk white thighs.
She hoped that it would happen today. Or that something would. She was hungry, and Serge was nowhere to be found. Not that Serge ever had much to offer her anymore. Not like the early days when he had been able to steal whole sausages. They used to sit under the bridge and share, bite for bite.
Armande shivered and tried to draw her black cotton stockings further up her thighs. The rain overflowed her bowl. In the bakery it would be so blissfully warm. She decided to go and look through the window, to see if she could catch Monsieur Béroul's eye.
No one paid much attention to her as she made her way over the cobblestoned street. Rainwater seeped in through the paper-thin soles of her shoes. The wind made her skirt skirl upwards. She wrapped her arms around herself and pressed her nose against the glass of the bakery window hopefully, just in front of the huge plate of chocolate cream buns that she dreamed of sometimes, but had never tasted.
Inside there was no sign of Monsieur Béroul at all, and Armande's heart sank. Where could he have gone to? Was he ill? Surely today, Wednesday, he would invite her in?
"You! Dirty beggar! Get away from my shop!"
Madame Béroul descended on her so quickly that Armande hardly had time to get away before the long tail of her hair was pulled out by the roots.
She ran, and it seemed to her that the angels were not watching over her as they ought to be. No Monsieur Béroul. No Serge. No one at all.
And then a hand gripped her arm, and she looked up into a face she had never seen before.
http://www.mythagoria.com/armande.jpg
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