Business Trip Abroad & Pregnancy

[MatthewVett]

Got some inspiration over from the Fetish & Sexuality Board. Basically, the idea is a man goes on a business trip abroad to some foreign, exotic locale, and ends up with a local girl. The two of them have some fun, but on his last night there, she has a special request for him: she wants him to leave her with a child to remember him by.

From there, I'm not really certain where to go. Maybe the story ends the next morning, or maybe there's an epilogue where he returns a few years later. But I admit, I like the idea of a beautiful woman who I might never see again asking me to impregnate her...

What do other people think?

 

[Carnevil9]

I think it has potential. There is something long-lasting about it, he can keep pondering the implications for the rest of his life.

Of course, you can always have him meet a young woman years later, who reminds him a lot of an exotic young foreign girl he once knew.....

 

[FSUBasketball]

You could add the aspect of his being married. I like the story idea as it could be quite realistic.

 

[MatthewVett]

You could add the aspect of his being married. I like the story idea as it could be quite realistic.

You don't think having the guy be married will kill a lot of sympathy for him?

 

[Lost_Yonder]

You don't think having the guy be married will kill a lot of sympathy for him?

why is sympathy an issue? The guy is already taking advantage of coming from wealth compared to the girl, then impregnates her and leaves her the next morning! Why doesn't he take her home with her? Hardly someone worth any sympathy!

Just a typical arrogant white american overseas - shitting on the world!

 

[MatthewVett]

why is sympathy an issue? The guy is already taking advantage of coming from wealth compared to the girl, then impregnates her and leaves her the next morning! Why doesn't he take her home with her? Hardly someone worth any sympathy!

Just a typical arrogant white american overseas - shitting on the world!

So, way to draw your own conclusions and ignore everything that actually was explicit in the original post. Great job.

 

[FSUBasketball]

You don't think having the guy be married will kill a lot of sympathy for him?

It might. It would also increase the intrigue on his part though of the forbidden aspect of the seduction and impregnation. It was merely a thought.

 

[callmeismael]

There are always ways of making a character in an unsympathetic situation more sympathetic. Perhaps he's married, but he has good reason to believe his wife cheats on him every time he goes away. Perhaps he and his wife have been unable to conceive, and it's been really emotionally difficult for him. Or he had always wanted a child, but his wife's priorities changed, and she no longer wants kids.

I'm not saying the story needs to have a married man, just that if a married man is the direction an author wants to explore, it's possible to make this guy sympathetic, but it needs to be handled carefully.

 

[PerilEyes]

You could add the aspect of his being married. I like the story idea as it could be quite realistic.

My thought as well.