Buisness is buisness...

[myeightinyou]

CHARACTER: Johnny Parker... 26 years old, 5'11" and 180 lbs, decently built but not overly muscular at all, jet black hair and dark brown eyes.

IC:
I stood there, leaning against the abandoned building in this slum of a neighborhood with nobody around, waiting and waiting. She was already ten minutes late, and seeing what it was I was waiting for, she really couldn't afford to be late.

You see, I'm a loan shark... I lend people money when they need it, and they pay me back with a little bit of interest. Every now and then, I run some scams to put some more money in my pocket, but I mainly stick to loans.

So while it would be a good thing for my customer to keep me waiting even longer, since it would mean that they'd owe me even more, I really didn't want that to happen... because, well, I felt bad for this one. Usually, people borrow money for their gamblings debts, and things like this, but this was different... this was a girl who moved out to the big city on her own, met me through a friend of a friend, and borrowed some money because she was falling behind on her college payments. Still, this is a buisness, so she would have to pay me back the $5000 she had borrowed and the extra $500 interest charge.

I looked at my watch and decided to give her another five minutes...

OOC: Anybody with half a brain can so where this is going to end up (hint: she won't have all of the money), so if you're interested in taking on the girl in this thread, feel free to jump in. If you're going to reply with single lines of text and not actual content, please don't even bother.

 

[katra_tyr_b]

Katie

22 raven hair, green eyes, celtic looks, ivory skin, 5'7" 122 pounds, 36 - 28-33
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I was pissed off about being late as he had warned me about the cost of making him wait. I was nervous about getting half of the money ripped off.

I stepped out of the car and walked over to him. I looked him over trying to get a feel for the mood that he was in. I was lookig around and getting paranoid that there might be someone in the shadows waiting to rip me off again.

"Look I am sorry that you had to wait. I am really trying to get your money paid back. I have part of it right here" Pulling the wad of bills from my bra. I looked into his eyes and waited for something.

With his hand thrust out I set the thousand dollars in his hand and waited for the reaction.

 

[myeightinyou]

She handed me the money with a look of uncertainity on her face. I looked at her, then at the money, and quickly flipped through it with my fingers. I looked down, dissapointed and unsure what to do about this.

"Listen, I really can't allow this to happen. You know how much you owe me, and I don't care what excuse you have. So one way or another, you have to pay me... and it's going to have to be tonight."

I looked directly at her, looking right into her eyes, making sure she knew that I was serious.

 

[catlover]

Frank

As Katie's boyfriend, I drove her to meet the loan shark with nthe grand I had given her to pay off against her loan. We knew it wasn't enough, but at least it was a show of good faith. Borrowing that much from him for her tuition wasn't smart, but she had done it before we met, and I couldnt do anything about it.

She had just confided in me with her problem, and I hadnt had the opportunity to get the rest of it together, but could within a few days, and even with the interest it would get her off the hook.

I watched as she approached him, and took the money out of her bra and handed it to him. I saw him leaf through it and then say something to her, just guessing what he had in mind.

I had my M-16 across my lap and raised it to the open window of my car, just in case i needed it. It was fortunate he had arranged this meeting in a remote location with noone around that I could see, but it was also possible he had associates overlooking the scene so I kept a sharp eye out.

 

[myeightinyou]

(just to keep this thing from going somewhere where i don't want it to go, no more characters... we've got johnny, katie, her boyfriend, and another character that's going to show up later... and that's going to be it)...

 

[katra_tyr_b]

Katie

"Look I am not trying to cheat you out of your money, honest. I just haven't been able to get it all together at one time. I promise that I will repay it." I was getting very nervous and was shaking in my boots.

I glanced back at the car and then back to Johnny.

"Look, you tell me what I have to do and it will get done. But I need about three more days."

 

[myeightinyou]

Johnny

As she told me that she didn't have all the money, I noticed her looking to her car and was hoping that she wasn't on making a run for it... that would just be silly.

"You don't understand, you HAVE to pay me..."

I decided I would scare her, so I reached for my handgun. Of course I wasn't going to use it on her, I just wanted to intimidate her so that maybe she'd take me a bit more serious. I looked around and made sure nobody was around, then pulled out the gun and kind of just flashed it, making sure that she saw it, and I pointed it at the ground, looking her right in the eyes.

"There aren't going to be any negotiations here, you understand?"

 

[katra_tyr_b]

Katie

I squecked in fear after seeing his gun and replied "Perfectly"

I was looking into his eyes and thinking that any second he is going to shoot me and I'll be dead.

"but I don't have any more cash"

 

[myeightinyou]

No more cash, huh? I was getting slightly frustrated with this girl, but all I wanted to do was scare her. "If you don't have cash, you're going to have to think of another way to me pay me..."

As I talked, I noticed her looking back to her car again and I began thinking that she wasn't thinking about making a run for it...

"Got somebody with you? Listen, whoever is in there, I say we all go back to my place and discuss this... I'm waving this gun around, and I don't wanna have to use it, so I'm going to allow you to come back to my place so we can figure this out like adults."

She seemed okay with that was I saying, but just then, the door to the car that she had come out of swung open...

 

[katra_tyr_b]

Katie

"My boyfriend is in the car and I don't want him to do something stupid."

I listened to him and what he was saying. "Okay I can do that."

 

[catlover]

Frank

When I saw his gun I came out of the car running. Im an ex Navy Seal and an expert with a weapon. I could have taken him down in a heartbeat, but Katie was in the line of fire, and I couldnt take a chance.

I got to them and asked her if she was OK, . She looked at me and told me she had agreed to go to his place and discuss completing the loan.. I was concerned that he might have back-up there, but looked at him and told him we would follow him in our car

I also told him I knew 17 ways to kill him silently without any weapon, so no funny stuff. He said "no problem. We can work it out"

As we returned to my car, I wondered what he might have in mind.

 

[myeightinyou]

Johnny

Seems as if the girl didn't come alone after all, but that didn't matter. I kept my cool and told the guy that there was no need to cause any unneeded problems. As I went back to my car, they went to their car, and began to follow me as I headed home.

Home was a little three-bedroom house in Brooklyn, New York. Nice and homey with some fancy furniture and a ton of electronics. Doing what I did for a living paid off, after all. As I pulled into my driveway, the other car pulled up behind me.

I walked over to the front door and walked in... and realized that my lights were on. I immediately pulled out my gun and told the girl and her boyfriend to stop where they were. I stepped inside, gun drawn, and realized that this was no threat...

No, in fact... there was a girl sitting on my couch. She couldn't have been older than 18, and was incredibly pretty. I had no clue who she was, but she didn't look like the harmful type. As I stepped inside, I waved the girl and her boyfriend in. Approaching the girl with a confused look on my face, I asked her, "so, uhh, who are you and why are you in my house?"

 

[katra_tyr_b]

Katie

I explained that I had to follow Johnny and that we would work out the differences. I certainly hoped that everything would work out.

 

[Asa]

*She looked over to him a petiete young girl barely 18 she bit her lip as she looked to him standing slowly. The black dress she wore at her fathers request. Her father hoped it would make her look appealing so that his debt would be forgotten. Skin tight black dress off the shoulders revealing just enough cleavage and stopped mid thigh her dark eyes looked to him as she spoke softly*

Davidson Edwards... My Father... He sent me here... He said you would understand why I was here

*She was obviously scared and confused but was doing as expected by her father as he told her she would be helping him out a great deal by going to this mans house*

 

[myeightinyou]

Johnny

Davidson Edwards, just friggin' great. Another non-payer, and in the same friggin' day... in the same hour, even. What the hell had the World come to? People expecting to not have to pay their loans back? Geez... can't believe he actually sent his daughter as payment. I remember our conversation clear as day when he first loaned money from me... he said, "if I can't pay you back, I'll send my 18-year old virgin daughter as payment." I laughed about it, and so did he, so I agreed... but I thought he was kidding! I was in disbelief due to the fact that she was actually here... and damn it, she was absolutely gorgeous. Small and petite with a beautiful body and this black dress she had on was pretty friggin' sweet.

Just thinking about the things I'd be able to do to this girl got me so friggin' excited that I almost forgot about Katie and her boyfriend. I didn't want to keep them waiting, but I wanted this Edwards girl right friggin' now...

I scratched my head as I looked to Katie, and then this 18-year old beauty sitting on my couch. As I put my gun away, I turned to Katie. "Listen, you two make yourself comfortable... the kitchen is over there, and the bar is in the corner of the room. Turn on the television, enjoy yourself, whatever... I'll be back in just a few minutes. I have to take care of something real quick... upstairs..."

Not giving Katie a chance to respond, I turned to the Edwards girl and told her to follow me as I walked up the stairs and into my bedroom. As I sat on my bed and she stood in front of me, I asked her... "So, what's your name?"

 

[catlover]

Frank

"Well, Katie- what do you think?"

We could just leave and get in touch with this guy when we can arrange for the money to pay him off, except that we need to get it agreed that there will be no more interest It looks like this little girl is payment for someone else's loan. Seems as though he will be busy for a while. Shall we just wait for him? What shall we do while we wait?"

 

[Asa]

Katya

*Her voice soft as it echoed her fear she looked to him. Having been led to a bedroom was not a comforting thought to her but she stood there biting a little at her lip*

Why did father need me to come here?

*The innocence of her words and expression said it all her father had not been joking about her being a virgin and her presence here a hope and prayer that she would be enough to cover such a massive debt*

 

[myeightinyou]

"Wait, you don't know why you're here?"

I scratched my head and hoped that this wouldn't be more difficult than it should be. When I realized that this girl's father sent her here for me to fuck as a form of payment, I was thinking that this should be easy as stealing candy from a baby. But, if she really was a virgin, why the hell would she give it up to me? Man oh man, I was starting to hope that this girl really loved her father...

"Well Katya, your father owes me a lot of money... a LOT of money... and he sent you to me as a form of payment."

 

[Asa]

Hearing what he said her eyes darted tothe door quickly then back to him seeing if she had any chance to get away as the fear deep down grew quickly*

Wh...what do you mean? What sort of payment? He... he did not send any money with me?

*her fears were that possibly right at what was about to be expected of her but she had never been with anyone in that way willingly much less like this and her father doing tis to her hurt and scared her deeply. Taking a step backwards slowly hoping this man would not notice till she had the chance to run*

 

[myeightinyou]

Johnny

"Money? No, no, you don't understand..."

I talked as I stood up and as soon as I stood, she froze in place. She looked so absolutely nervous that I almost felt bad for her... but then I remember her father's lack of cash and realized what it was that I was going to do to her, and stopped feeling so bad. I shut the door to my room and walked up behind her, placing my arms on her hips and whipsering into her ear now...

"No money... YOU'RE the payment, sweetie."

 

[Asa]

*She tensed at his words then his hands on her hips and his closeness to her her voice so flooded with terror she could barely muster a whisper* Please... please let me go... D... don't so this please... I've... never... please don't so this

*SHe tried to quickly move away from him turning so she could keep an eye on him knowing she was trapped but had to get away somehow even though she knew it was pointless this man was going to do whatever he wanted to her and her own father was willing to let it happen*

 

[myeightinyou]

At the moment when she turned away from me, I simply could not hold it in anymore... all this lust that had been building up had taken over. I grabbed her by her hips and tossed her onto my bed. As I pulled my shirt off over my head, I walked up to the front of her bed so that I was standing right in front of where she was laying.

"Now, be a good girl and take off that dress for me."

 

[Asa]

*SUddenly landing on the bed she was gripped with fear as she moved to look at him trembling. SHe knew she had no choice she fought hard not to cry as she slowly pushed the dress from her arms pulling her slender arms from the wrap around material over them as she then reached back to undo the zipper ofhte dress andthen slipped from it. SItting there now in nothing but a small pair of bikini cut panties she tried to cover herself staring down at the material of the bed*

 

[myeightinyou]

Johnny

I found myself in awe of her as she removed her dress and now sat on my bed wearing nothing but these cute panties. She covered her breasts with her arms and kept her eyes away from mine at all times. I got up onto my bed and told her to lean back... she refused, so I pushed her back and forcefully spread her legs open. She pleaded for me to stop, but I could tell that deep down inside, she knew she had to do this for her father.

I reached forward and grabbed her breasts, fondling and squeezing them. Again, she kept her eyes away from mine, as she tried her hardest not to break into tears. I leaned over her and started to tease her nipples with my tongue, licking them and then sucking them into my mouth.

I suddenly leaned back and smiled. She looked up for a second, perhaps thinking that maybe I was having second thoughts and was goign to let her go.

"Now, take off your panties and play with yourself for me."

 

[Asa]

*Shoved down and her legs so roughly forced apart she wanted to cry but she knew tears would not make him stop. Then his hands so roughly fondling her.... it hurt but she dared not make a sound to reveal that and then... his mouth on her she shuddered near gagging from disgust and fear as she layed there.*

*His Orders.... NO she couldn't remove them then there was nothing protecting her not that it was any real protection but she would be fully exposed to this man she felt sick at the rest of his request... she had no idea what to do but in trying to save her fathers and possibly now her own life she slipped from the panties and her hands rubbed at her own breasts not really sure what he meant. IN all her innocence she truely had no clue but eventually when he forced one ofher hands to her pussy she slowly figured out what he wanted to see and began to do so. Fingers slipping around her clit and pussy lips as her other hand trembled and ran over her breasts*