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Janet Tenaj

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All I have to say is OH MY GOD WHAT A FUCKING GOOD STORY!


[This message has been edited by Janet Tenaj (edited 05-03-2000).]
 
Damn it! I can't write similes like that. I have to think like for DAYS to get one as good as Lawrence's.

Excellent story. I found absolutely nothing I could pick on, and that's amazing. The development of the son's infatuation was perfect. The whole story flowed like...like...

Is there a freakin' simile writing essay in the Writer's Resources section? <wails>
 
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