Buffy Loves Cordy

[buffysummers]

Hi, to all members and writers,

For the first time I published an erotic story on the internet. I always had a strong desire to write down fantasies and ideas. But never managed to actually make a whole complete story.
So this one is my first. It's a lesbian story of Buffy who loves and desires Cordelia. Feedback on this is very important to me. It will stimulate me to make more stories. All sort of comments are welcome. The best way of learning is to get as much opinions and feedback as possible. Thank you for your time.

Greetings

 

[buffysummers]

I forget to add the url. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=42178
This will make it easier to find it for you guys.
Are there more Buffy superfans like me?
Have fun with this story. I'm busy with a second story now, containing Willow/Tara/Buffy.

Greetings

 

[Guest]

Buffy,

Your storyline is interesting. The many grammatical errors, however, are very distracting. I suggest you read your work carefully, especially noting disagreements of tense. This could be a good work.