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....this one begs to be anal story...just a question of what else to do a story based on the Van Morrison song...
Brown-Eyed Girl....
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lol I love the "twist" of using this title for an anal sex story. Should it be a pun and the woman really has brown eyes? Do you already have a plot beyond anal sex hon?
(I'm listening to the song, now, to see if more ideas come to me before I send this post!
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Man, the actual song almost sounds too pure to perv up. I suppose this same tale of anal sex could be set in the early 60s with two young lovers that never engaged in anything beyond "heavy petting" yet.
Lyrics Snippet:
So hard to find my way, now that I'm all on my own
I saw you just the other day, my, how you have grown!
Cast my memory back there, Lord, sometimes I'm overcome thinking 'bout
Making love in the green grass, behind the stadium with you ...
My brown eyed girl
You, my brown eyed girl
Should the whole story be a "flashback" of a now older man? Again, the "making love in the green grass" was anal sex...
(I'm listening to the song, now, to see if more ideas come to me before I send this post!
)Man, the actual song almost sounds too pure to perv up.
I suppose this same tale of anal sex could be set in the early 60s with two young lovers that never engaged in anything beyond "heavy petting" yet. Lyrics Snippet:
So hard to find my way, now that I'm all on my own
I saw you just the other day, my, how you have grown!
Cast my memory back there, Lord, sometimes I'm overcome thinking 'bout
Making love in the green grass, behind the stadium with you ...
My brown eyed girl
You, my brown eyed girl
Should the whole story be a "flashback" of a now older man? Again, the "making love in the green grass" was anal sex...
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P.S.
I've added that title to my "to do" list, now.
I've added that title to my "to do" list, now.
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Hallowed Eve said:lol I love the "twist" of using this title for an anal sex story. Should it be a pun and the woman really has brown eyes? Do you already have a plot beyond anal sex hon?
(I'm listening to the song, now, to see if more ideas come to me before I send this post!
Man, the actual song almost sounds too pure to perv up.
Lyrics Snippet:
So hard to find my way, now that I'm all on my own
I saw you just the other day, my, how you have grown!
Cast my memory back there, Lord, sometimes I'm overcome thinking 'bout
Making love in the green grass, behind the stadium with you ...
My brown eyed girl
You, my brown eyed girl
Should the whole story be a "flashback" of a now older man? Again, the "making love in the green grass" was anal sex...
Was thinking anal incest, actually....uncle/niece....
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ltnsfr007 said:That WAS what the song meant
Was it?
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Otto26 said:
Interesting twist....maybe white uncle with a black niece....
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SEVERUSMAX said:Was thinking anal incest, actually....uncle/niece....
You naughty boy, I mean Sir.
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Hallowed Eve said:You naughty boy, I mean Sir.
LOL....hehehe....uncle/niece just sounded right for this one....torn between the crazy bachelor uncle or the married and adulterous uncle.....
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I think adulterous uncle is better. Is the girl his blood neice or his wife's?
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Hallowed Eve said:
His, I was thinking.....his sister married a black man and had a daughter by him. If I do the adultery thing, I don't want to make him blameless. Just, well, flawed and human....I can't have all of my male protagonists justified in their affairs by wives who won't put out and stuff like that....no, I'd say that he yields to the opportunity to take care of 3 unsatisfied kinks at once: incest, anal, and interracial. Things that he doesn't get from the wife, but she isn't depriving him in general. So he's naughty....but in a very understandable way....
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SEVERUSMAX said:
That's cool. Someone has to be bad first.
Maybe the wife in this tale finds out and does the sis-in-law's hubby. lolAnyway, if ever I get to this tale I'm going to write it as the song suggests... An older man flashbacking to either (senior) high school days or early college with his sweetie.
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Hallowed Eve said:That's cool. Someone has to be bad first.
Anyway, if ever I get to this tale I'm going to write it as the song suggests... An older man flashbacking to either (senior) high school days or early college with his sweetie.
That's a cool way to do it....especially with the twist of anal adding just a touch of depravity to the innocence of the first love....
And the revenge idea...could be fun....maybe the niece has a beau and the wife fucks him instead as revenge for both of them....
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SEVERUSMAX said:And the revenge idea...could be fun....maybe the niece has a beau and the wife fucks him instead as revenge for both of them....
Ah, maybe.
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Otto26 said:
Nice idea, and probably true. I'm always glad to see more wm/bf stories.
The uncle/niece thing sounds good too. In fact, older man/young woman is very much in keeping with Van Morrison. In his famous review of Astral Weeks, the legendary rock critic Lester Bangs talked about his theory that a passion for young girls was central to Van's early work.
http://www.harbour.sfu.ca/~hayward/van/reviews/astral.html
His major piece of evidence was the love song Cyprus Avenue, where you discover in the last line that the object of the singer's affection is 14 years old. Too young for Literotica, of course, but you could age the girl 4 years.
Sorry for the digression. I'm a major Van fan.
