Brother/Sister story

[BlackSnake]

The sister wakes in the middle of the night to find that she had not been dreaming. She caught her brother with his cock inside of her womanhood after he had cum.

She pounds him to the point where he had to be rushed to the hospital. Her martial arts training aided her in giving her brother two black eyes, a broken arm, broken ribs, and a punchered lung.

He moved out of their parent's house after his release from the hospital. She never saw his face since that night.

Ten years later, the sister's child is in peril in need of a bone cell transplant. The brother refuses any call or message from his sister. He doesn't know what her problem is nor does he care to know.

The sister contacts the brother's wife and meets with her without the brother knowing. The sister shows the brother's wife pictures of the brother and sister together. The sister tells the wife how close she and the brother use to be. They had done everything together. The sister was very vague as to what happened between her and her brother. The sister is desperate for her child. The brother's wife listened to the sister, and goes back and ask the brother if he would get tested in hopes of saving the child. He refuses.

The sister shows up at the brother's home and is let in by his wife. The wife leaves them alone together. The sister begs the brother for help, and finally blurts out the child is his. He is shocked and frightened, and horrified that his wife might know. The sister says that she had not told anyone that the child was his, not even their parents.

The sister tells the brother that the only match for the child would have to be from a sibling with the same father and mother. The brother is horrified to think that his sister was suggesting that they have another child together.

The sister begs the brother to forgive her for hurting him, and tries to get him to remember how close that had always been. The brother finally confesses that the only reason he did that to her was because he was in love with her. But now he had found someone new, his wife who he loved and couldn't betray his wife even if he wanted to help.

The wife had over heard the entire conversation, and understood. The wife insisted that he help his sister and their child. She understood that the only way they could produce another child without the chance of being detected was to sleep together.

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[BlackSnake]

yes/no ?

 

[wishfulthinking]

Interesting up until the part where the wife encourages him to sleep with another woman, and that this woman is his sister. Very understanding of her

 

[BlackSnake]

Interesting up until the part where the wife encourages him to sleep with another woman, and that this woman is his sister. Very understanding of her

So, what if the wife doesn't find out that the child is her husband's child? The brother and sister hides that fact from her. The brother agrees to secretly help the sister get pregnant again. The wife thinks she help heal the bond between brother and sister.

The sex between brother and sister become more than about getting her pregnant. The wife is stupid to what is going on, like the banana

 

[wishfulthinking]

Hey, don't pick on the banana

Yeah, but you gotta keep in mind that adultery is a touchy subject.

 

[sirhugs]

Hey, don't pick on the banana

Yeah, but you gotta keep in mind that adultery is a touchy subject.

also a feely subject

 

[BlackSnake]

also a feely subject

lol....Okay, say the brother's main thought is not about having sex with the woman he grew up to love, but the fact that he would be cheating on his wife.

Oops! Sex with his sister after all those years turns out to be better than with his wife.

Oops! He is so torn!

Oops! The sister is pregnant, but hasn't told her brother yet, so he would continue having sex with her.

Oops! The wife figures that something isn't right

 

[MirazTheMac]

I'd be bloody offended if the girl didn't wake up until after I'd cum.

 

[TheCaptain]

I really like this idea... I know, BIG surprise!

I think everything in your original post is a great outline for the story, bar the last sentence of the wife overhearing it all and being an encouraging voice in the argument of getting his sister pregnant again - not very plausible at all! I know plausibility sometimes takes a back seat to Literotica tales, and sometimes for the better, but I reckon the whole drama of NEEDING to help un-fuck-up a fucked-up situation eek is probably the big draw of this, and adds a sense of originality to the incest twist.

Sort of making the brother character a semi-reluctant participant of it all is a good way to go... he's doing this again for the most part to help his sister and the child that they have together, and is exceedingly worried about the wife finding out about it.

Is the bro char and his wife childless? Do they have children of their own? Somehow, I see the wife being a sexy maternal type, sort of Desperate Housewives-esque but without the infidelity/scandal. And I would personally think they would have children together now, or at least one child, so the brother character would know how important a child is to his sister's life, but would also be extremely worried about the impact this would have on his own family, if it ever got back to them.

All round, a good story idea. Worthy of more consideration... I'd type this up myself, if my own computer was running at the moment and BlackSnake wasn't doing the same himself *sigh.

Oh well, I should really concentrate moreso on work now. So much harder minus laptop...

Capt

 

[jtmalone70]

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[TheCaptain]

I think there's a few questions that would pop into the reader's mind, regarding this plot outline.

Why would the sister beg her brother's forgiveness? What did she do to him that was so bad? He raped her. I think he got off light with only a few broken bones.

I think wishfulthinking had it right, when she suggested it a bit of a stretch for the wife to encourage the brother to sleep with his sister, in order to get her pregnant. I think a rational person is more likely to suggest they go to a fertility clinic where he can become a sperm donor to his sister, minus any actual sexual intercourse. Of course, I also think a rational wife would really take pause to consider just what she's got herself into. Granted, people can turn over a new leaf...

Secondly, the sister seems rather eager to mend the relationship with her brother, after he raped and impregnated her. I can understand her desperation, in terms of saving her child, but, based on what I've read in the story outline, she comes across as a bit too forgive-and-forget, considering what he did to her.

Why would she need to show the wife pictures of her and her brother together, ostensibly in happier times? Wouldn't it go without saying, there was a time when they got along? And wouldn't the wife be at least mildly interested, long before this, as to why her husband and his sister don't get along? My husband didn't get along with his parents, not to mention my mom's siblings and I knew exactly why, simply because I asked.

Given the nature of the story, I'm more inclined to think it less suited for the erotic genre and more so for serious literature. It's not a bad idea in the least, but it does need a bit of polishing.

I really think you've got something you could work with here!

Those are valid points, yes... I think the relationship between the sister and brother needs to be a little different than the simple 'sis crawls back to bro on hands and knees begging for help' scenario, if the rape at the start is the way that it's described by BlackSnake.

I don't really know if that's a necessary component of the story myself, the rape part, but BlackSnake may wish this to be the main event of the whole tale, the focalpoint for all the characters, to explain each person's dynamics later on down the line.

I would think that if the sister was a little more concensual to the first act of sexual intercourse, thou maybe not completely and utterly a willing participant, the GUILT over it all might drive her to certain acts or certain conclusions that some people might find a little strange, but understandable to a desperate, confused woman.

The wife definitely SHOULDN'T be encouraging this to happen - I believe it adds a little extra spice to the story if they are trying to keep it all from her.

Well, for one thing, doesn't there need to be identification involved in sperm donership? What if the brother character is worried about his wife finding out if they did this? I don't know how to specifically counter this argument, as it does make sense... but it has to be countered or the story pretty much falls flat on its face in the realism department. That hardly really matters with Lit, I know .

Why does the wife have to know EXACTLY what the brother's issues are with his sister? If they're newly married, or married for a couple of years or something, maybe living a bit of a distance away from the rest of the family and the sister, would the issue really be such a big deal? I think its a pretty common occurance that people don't get along with certain members of their family.

I don't get on well at all with my older brother, for certain personal reasons, and I don't think either one of us has shared the reasons why with either of our significant others. A couple of my more long-term girlfriends have asked why this is, I have said its between me and him, and they respected this, for the most part. Wouldnt the wife respect this if the brother char wants to keep this reason to himself, also, or is it just me, ignorant of the marriage dynamic?

Just my thoughts on it all...

Capt

 

[emap]

The way I look at it, instead of the sister forgiving him, instead she comes to him with this problem, and tells him she needs to have another baby by the same man, the whole time not able to stand him because of what he did in the first place. Then over time she finds that she is waiting with baited breath for when he comes to fuck her each night until she can't stand to not have him in her and doesn't tell him she got pregnant again until she starts showing and he can tell.

 

[BlackSnake]

The way I look at it, instead of the sister forgiving him, instead she comes to him with this problem, and tells him she needs to have another baby by the same man, the whole time not able to stand him because of what he did in the first place. Then over time she finds that she is waiting with baited breath for when he comes to fuck her each night until she can't stand to not have him in her and doesn't tell him she got pregnant again until she starts showing and he can tell.

Sorry I missed out on the discussion. Emap has it right. I agree with keeping it from the wife. The brother and his wife having a child is an emotional plus. I will have to try harder on this one, because the story is really good.

The sister doesn't have to beg, but she can't believe he is reluctance to help. He made the child without her concent.

This story is emotionally charged. It will be a couple of days before I can begin. I cut the tip of my middle finger on my right hand. I did it with a razor, so it needs to heal.

 

[BlackSnake]

I got a new band-ad. I can type

 

[sirhugs]

I got a new band-ad. I can type

so cool

 

[BlackSnake]

so cool

I was helping a friend get his cafe ready for it's grand opening. I was cutting and the blade got caught and the force I was using was too great for me to hold on. I slid across the blade. It wasn't an ouch, but blood went everywhere. That was more of a pain to clean up.

He is doing wireless and having a book club. How cool is that for a cafe/ice cream/sandwich shop

 

[sirhugs]

I was helping a friend get his cafe ready for it's grand opening. I was cutting and the blade got caught and the force I was using was too great for me to hold on. I slid across the blade. It wasn't an ouch, but blood went everywhere. That was more of a pain to clean up.

He is doing wireless and having a book club. How cool is that for a cafe/ice cream/sandwich shop

sounds like a natural for the 'location' thread