Broken down in a blizzard (open for women)

gavinco90210

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Broken down in a blizzard (closed for angelofyournightmares)

(This role-play will consist of a female lead in the first person, narrated by me in the second person)

For example

Me: You look up ahead and gasp.

Lead: What the hell in going on?! I begin to panic.

Me: You duck down to avoid the flying gopher. Suddenly you hear a voice, "Ohey ye matey!"

(just an example) =) Now for the real thing
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You wipe your eyes languidly, trying to stay focused on the road. It must be past four am, but the soft buzz from Jina's New Year party has only begun to wear off. The light from the headlights darts and swirls frantically on the heavily falling snow, blocking out the mysterious blackness.

Hours ago you were comfortably beside the fire at your college friends' ski lodge. Now you must have made a wrong turn and headed up into the mountains. Damn! you say and begin to tremble softly. The snow becomes heavier and heavier, obscuring the narrow curvy road.

Suddenly, your field of vision is filled with huge ominous pine trees to which you careen uncontrollably. You slam on the brakes but...
 
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Alicia

Alicia wasn't sure where she was and her head was pounding, what the hell had she done and why didn't she just agree to stay with her friends.. that was easy she wanted to be alone to clear her thoughts and her hangover.

The chill began to get to me not that my car wasn't warm just that.. she was beginning to become just slightly frightened and had no idea what she was going to do, she was lost.

As I slam my breaks I let out a scream as the car only spins crashing slightly causing her to go blank...

ooc:Hope thats okay if not see fit to change it how you like.
 
AngelofyourNighmares said:
Alicia wasn't sure where she was and her head was pounding, what the hell had she done and why didn't she just agree to stay with her friends.. that was easy she wanted to be alone to clear her thoughts and her hangover.

The chill began to get to me not that my car wasn't warm just that.. she was beginning to become just slightly frightened and had no idea what she was going to do, she was lost.

As I slam my breaks I let out a scream as the car only spins crashing slightly causing her to go blank...

ooc:Hope thats okay if not see fit to change it how you like.

ooc: great job! I suggest using first person, but third works as well.

You scream and wake up flustered and disheveled. With terror, you see the bouncing beam of a flashlight peering into the car window in the dark night.

A man leans over the hood outside, trying to peer in you can not make out his face. "Hey!" "Are you ok"

Nervously, your first instinct is to lock the door, but it doesn't take long to tell you are freezing. You arms and legs are numb. You must have passed out.

"You've been in crash " I'm here to help"
 
Broken down (closed for angelofyournightmares)

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Alicia

When the light hits her eyes she closes them cause it seems to blind her and cause her head to hurt ten times worse.

''Where am I?'' She says in a tone of fear and in a tone of a whisper.

I winder to myself what might have happened but I can't really feel my legs nor my body, it was so cold the car crash must have kocked the heat out.

She only shakes her head as he tells her he was there to help.
 
AngelofyourNighmares said:
When the light hits her eyes she closes them cause it seems to blind her and cause her head to hurt ten times worse.

''Where am I?'' She says in a tone of fear and in a tone of a whisper.

I winder to myself what might have happened but I can't really feel my legs nor my body, it was so cold the car crash must have kocked the heat out.

She only shakes her head as he tells her he was there to help.

He tries to shout but the howling of the wind drowns out his voice...

He approaches the side of the car and begins to reach for the car handle.

You nervously back up and look at the tall man, completely covered except for dark almost threatening eyes. You decide that there is no choice but to trust him.

Slowly he pulls open the door, but can only move it about a foot due to the snow drift.

"Don't worry, I'll get you outta there" he speaks in a low gravelly yet resassruing tone

You cautiously lead forward and let him start to reach his arms around your back to pull you out...
 
Alicia

She notices his approach and get scared and slightly looks away for a moment, but knowing if she wanted to live would have to eventually give in and allow him to help her.

I allow my frozen arms to go around his nect as my head leans againt his shoulder.. givingin to the man that was there to save her.

''I'm so cold'' She whispered softly.

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c356/Becks2Cute4You/409444080_m.jpg(Pic of Alicia)
 
AngelofyourNighmares said:
She notices his approach and get scared and slightly looks away for a moment, but knowing if she wanted to live would have to eventually give in and allow him to help her.

I allow my frozen arms to go around his nect as my head leans againt his shoulder.. givingin to the man that was there to save her.

''I'm so cold'' She whispered softly.

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c356/Becks2Cute4You/409444080_m.jpg(Pic of Alicia)

"No" he says quickly with a slight grunt as he pulls you slightly up out of your seat, "that is a good thing"

Any longer and you would start to freeze, then wouldn't feel anything. That means that you still have blood flow..."

a he speaks he hoists you up and out of the car...slipping he slides down onto his back and you fall on top of him...

"sorry" He works his way up and tried to help you to your feet...but your legs go weak and you stumble into his arms again...

"what I was saying, is that you should be ok...as long as we can get you warmed up and out of these wet....well, You'll be fine there"

With this he kneels down and quite easily tosses you onto his back...
 
gavinco90210 said:
"No" he says quickly with a slight grunt as he pulls you slightly up out of your seat, "that is a good thing"

Any longer and you would start to freeze, then wouldn't feel anything. That means that you still have blood flow..."

a he speaks he hoists you up and out of the car...slipping he slides down onto his back and you fall on top of him...

"sorry" He works his way up and tried to help you to your feet...but your legs go weak and you stumble into his arms again...

"what I was saying, is that you should be ok...as long as we can get you warmed up and out of these wet....well, You'll be fine there"

With this he kneels down and quite easily tosses you onto his back...

somebody may fill in for the female role...
 
If I may...

gavinco90210 said:
"No" he says quickly with a slight grunt as he pulls you slightly up out of your seat, "that is a good thing"...

Any longer and you would start to freeze, then wouldn't feel anything. That means that you still have blood flow..."

I nod, body shaking with fear but mostly cold, I watch his face for signs of anything but all I see is concern,

he hoists you up and out of the car...slipping he slides down onto his back and you fall on top of him...
I wince as I fall onto him


"sorry" He works his way up and tried to help you to your feet...

I try to walk with his help but I feel the energy drain from me and I fall into his armsm I look away embarrased by my weakness

"what I was saying, is that you should be ok...as long as we can get you warmed up and out of these wet....well, You'll be fine there"

With this he kneels down and quite easily tosses you onto his back

She struggles her mind is in a state of shock and confusion and she does not know wether to trust him...and getting out of her clothes? She felt herself blush.
She starts to protest, "I'm fine...really...I-I - ah!" she winces as a bolt of pain rushes through her leg, sighing she lets herself be carried by this stranger.
 
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OOC: Ooops

OOOC: It looked like you disconnected. Sorry to be impatient. I like to keep the action going.

You don't have to accept my apologies...but it sure is cold outside...
 
Alicia

Alicia wasn't sure what to do with herself her heart was racing which maybe that was a good thing as well. She looked at him as he grabbed her carefully.

She was still in and out of it alot she looked at him softly wanting so badly to close her eyes.

She would look around and try to gather where she was but she had no idea what so ever.
 
AngelofyourNighmares said:
Alicia wasn't sure what to do with herself her heart was racing which maybe that was a good thing as well. She looked at him as he grabbed her carefully.

She was still in and out of it alot she looked at him softly wanting so badly to close her eyes.

She would look around and try to gather where she was but she had no idea what so ever.

She was very sore, and each time he would step, it would send an ache through her frame. The man was kind, but gruff. He had not shaved in a few days and his beard scraped along the side of your hip as he carried you.

"I have a cabin just down the way...How did you get so far up this road in thsi weather?"
 
Alicia

She groaned lightly with every step this man took, she was grateful that he had found her, or she might be dead by now. She looked slightly up at him but held tightly onto him.

''I was leaving some friends at the ski lodge.. I got lost...'' She said softly as she felt very weak.
 
AngelofyourNighmares said:
She groaned lightly with every step this man took, she was grateful that he had found her, or she might be dead by now. She looked slightly up at him but held tightly onto him.

''I was leaving some friends at the ski lodge.. I got lost...'' She said softly as she felt very weak.

Looking over, she saw a small cabin through the trees. It was rustic, but there was a warm glow inside and smoke rising from the chimney.

"I came up here for New Years to get away for a while" I have some water heating up in a cauldron by the fire...you should probably have a hot bath to get you warmed up...
 
Alicia

Alicia looked at the cabin as he carried her... ''Nice place..'' She whispered as she watched him carefully.

Alicia nodded her head in agreement to his suggestion knowing this man probably knew best at the moment.
 
AngelofyourNighmares said:
Alicia looked at the cabin as he carried her... ''Nice place..'' She whispered as she watched him carefully.

Alicia nodded her head in agreement to his suggestion knowing this man probably knew best at the moment.

They arrived and he set her down on top of the rickety wooden steps.

"right this way"

as he pushed the door aside, alicia plunged into the open doorway...immediately, he carried her over to the couch....

"let me help you with that coat"

he peals away the thin leather coat...admiring the little pink and blue silk top that you wore to the party...casually admiring the gentle curves....

Looks like you weren't dresses for such an adventure...

Suddenly alicia hears a faint movement in the bedroom
 
Megan

Megan hummed cheerfully as she pocked at the fire, she tugged at the red lingerie she was wearing and smiled, her husband would have a huge suprise seeing her here, she had told him that she couldn't come to the cabin this year because of work "priorities". She chuckled to herself.

She poured two glasses of champagne and carried them into the bdroom, she lay down on the bed and sipped her champagne, she knew it wouldnt be long till he returned , she was lucky to have arrive whhile he was off on one of his "nature walks" and she'd got into the house without him seeing her, her car was parked at the back so it could not be seen.

She settled down into the silky sheets of the master bed and waited...
 
He sees Alicias shock...Oh it is ok. My wif...uh...girlfriend is just uh...taking a nap...yeah."

Maybe she could help with you."

"does anything hurt"

he kneels beside her and gazes into her eyes, then sheepishly turn away as he begins to massage alicia's lower leg. "can you feel that?"
 
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