Brittney Spears interactive

Dagger

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Mad props to Extreme for the new interactive story. It is one of the best stories I've seen. Keep up the good work, I would love to see more celebrity stories like that one.
 
This was one of the worst written stories I've read so far on this site. Not only was it predictable, it was rife with spelling and grammatical errors. Not all the readers are teenage boys who can't get a date to save their lives. Those of us who aren't have higher literary standards which *are* met by other material on this site. Proofread, please.
 
I want to tell the author of this story that the idea was not a bad one. I am sorry to say that I don't know who Britny Spears is though.
I thought it was a good effort. Spelling needed work but I got the drift. Keep up the good effort.
 
I think Ms. Spears needs an outlet to show us all what's under that school uniform!
 
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