TabooTeller
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- Jul 4, 2003
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http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=121874
Just a word or two from the writer, First if anyone who has read the story is reading this I have reedited chapters one and two. No major changes even though I did change a sex scene in chapter two. But as usually it should be easier to read now. I have tried to find an editor but two disappeared on me after they said yes and another two never responded.
Second this was not the orginal Brittany and Jon story. I had problems trying to decide how to end it and asked for some suggestions from two people. Both suggested the same major change and my mind went with the idea and came up with this version. I still want to do the orginal but I still am not sure how to end it. I have three or four different endings, I need to decide on.
Third one of the two who looked over the orginal idea sent me a synopses for an idea for Brittany and Jon he would like to see written about. Too many changes for what I wanted to do but I think, if he happens to be reading this, he should write it out himself or maybe work with an established writer if he thinks he can't write. Many people would find some of his scenes very erotic and probably would like the over all story too. Just make sure people don't confuss it with my Brittany and Jon stories.
Fourthly for those who haven't read the public comments recently I am going to do a second and thrid adventure with them, for Tommy isn't done trying yet. He has worst things in mind for the next two adventures. But That's all I am going to say about it.
As always I like comments either here or on the public comments or the ordinary comments, even though because the security numbers still won't come up for me I can't respond to public comments.
TabooTeller
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=233490
Just a word or two from the writer, First if anyone who has read the story is reading this I have reedited chapters one and two. No major changes even though I did change a sex scene in chapter two. But as usually it should be easier to read now. I have tried to find an editor but two disappeared on me after they said yes and another two never responded.
Second this was not the orginal Brittany and Jon story. I had problems trying to decide how to end it and asked for some suggestions from two people. Both suggested the same major change and my mind went with the idea and came up with this version. I still want to do the orginal but I still am not sure how to end it. I have three or four different endings, I need to decide on.
Third one of the two who looked over the orginal idea sent me a synopses for an idea for Brittany and Jon he would like to see written about. Too many changes for what I wanted to do but I think, if he happens to be reading this, he should write it out himself or maybe work with an established writer if he thinks he can't write. Many people would find some of his scenes very erotic and probably would like the over all story too. Just make sure people don't confuss it with my Brittany and Jon stories.
Fourthly for those who haven't read the public comments recently I am going to do a second and thrid adventure with them, for Tommy isn't done trying yet. He has worst things in mind for the next two adventures. But That's all I am going to say about it.
As always I like comments either here or on the public comments or the ordinary comments, even though because the security numbers still won't come up for me I can't respond to public comments.
TabooTeller
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=233490
