Brilliant idea?

[Xander06]

Opinions please.

A girl takes her computer to the computer shop because its broken (and she happens to like the computer guy). But there are some naughty videos of her on it. Of course the diligant computer guy happens to stumble on them and watches them. Anywho, he fixes the computer, it breaks again, and there are more (new videos), when she brings it back. This goes on for a while until she starts calling his name in the movies and he wises up and they go for it.

Old story (hopefully) new setting. Do you think it could fly?

 

[Texguy84]

Well, it certainly makes me want to take an IT class.

 

[subwannabe]

Good story. If I were writing it though I would have the computer guy blackmail her into being his sex slave. Maybe that is what she was hoping for in the first place, maybe not.

 

[Texguy84]

Definitely a different approach. If you want to go the comedy route, after repeated rounds of this and the guy still not asking her out, you might just have her walk into the shop, computer in hand, and club him over the head with it, dragging him back to her basement to tie him up and have her way with him, out of frustration of him not making the first move.

 

[jeninflorida]

I have a story like this coming out, should be ready in two weeks

Opinions please.

A girl takes her computer to the computer shop because its broken (and she happens to like the computer guy). But there are some naughty videos of her on it. Of course the diligant computer guy happens to stumble on them and watches them. Anywho, he fixes the computer, it breaks again, and there are more (new videos), when she brings it back. This goes on for a while until she starts calling his name in the movies and he wises up and they go for it.

Old story (hopefully) new setting. Do you think it could fly?

 

[snooper]

Definitely a different approach. If you want to go the comedy route, after repeated rounds of this and the guy still not asking her out, you might just have her walk into the shop, computer in hand, and club him over the head with it, dragging him back to her basement to tie him up and have her way with him, out of frustration of him not making the first move.
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"There is no problem that can not be solved with suitable applications of lubricant or force."

I prefer the lubricant solution to the force one.

 

[Xander06]

I have a story like this coming out, should be ready in two weeks

Remind me to read it!

 

[Frank Noir]

I like it.
The voyeurism aspects in particular. And then the realization that it was all a deliberate plot.

It's funny to watch another writer's mind at work. If I wrote this, the girl would leave the videos on the computer unintentionally. The computer guy would then force her to watch them with them (the very next time she visited the shop), leading to more or less consensual sex. He'd probably capture that act on video, too. A video he could then leave on the computer of every future female customer - or something...

 

[selectivemaster]

nice one
I'll have to pay more atention to the PC that come into the shop

Opinions please.

A girl takes her computer to the computer shop because its broken (and she happens to like the computer guy). But there are some naughty videos of her on it. Of course the diligant computer guy happens to stumble on them and watches them. Anywho, he fixes the computer, it breaks again, and there are more (new videos), when she brings it back. This goes on for a while until she starts calling his name in the movies and he wises up and they go for it.

Old story (hopefully) new setting. Do you think it could fly?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Of course this story could fly. I kind of like the idea of the IT guy blackmailing the woman to do whatever it is he wants after he finds the first set of videos on the computer.

He could make her take new ones, after all...

 

[snooper]

Of course this story could fly. I kind of like the idea of the IT guy blackmailing the woman to do whatever it is he wants after he finds the first set of videos on the computer.

He could make her take new ones, after all...

Especially if "whatever it is he wants" is actually whatever it is she wants!

 

[Lovepotion69]

This reminds me of when I brought my computer into the local store. The guy had been flirting with me before with the most direct lines that always caught me off guard. Last winter I brought my computer in again and when I got home I remembered I had quite a few begun Lit stories on it... Don't think he ever saw them though.

Oh, and yes, we did go on a few dates. Turned out he was a bit of a weirdo though!