Breaking the Habit (Soap Opera)

[Ravin the Poet]

Hello,

I'm not sure if this is the proper area or not, but it asked for feedback so this is where I will put it. Over the past week I have been working long and hard on my online Soap Opera Breaking the Habit. Anyway, this is going to be a running project of mine and I hope to continue it for awhile.

I am a major Days of our Lives fan, and have become very involved in the show. I never miss one. After watching it for a few months, I got the idea of writing my own, because it would help me a great deal in my writing.

SO any feedback on the stories would be great. As you know, it will take awhile for things to develop, but hopefully it turns out alright.

Click Here for Breaking the Habit

Thanks very much

Ravin

 

[Guest]

One of the .GIF is dead.

Font is too small for me.

No ugly actors.

4.49 for the effort.

I hardly watch soap and I have no idea what goes on the days of our lives except Joey plays Dr. de morey and his evil twin brother Dwain.

 

[Ravin the Poet]

I had to remove one of the gifs because it was a picture of one of my friends and she didn't want it on there anymore. I still need to find a replace ment.

Also, Joey doesn't play anyone on Days of Our Lives. The thing they do on friends is just made up. He really isn't on and the show, and there is no Dr Drak Ramora or what ever.

Ravin

 

[Guest]

The thing they do on friends is just made up. He really isn't on and the show, and there is no Dr Drak Ramora or what ever.

Ravin