Bondage Puzzle

RicoLouis

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Here is a rough draft of the beginning of a story idea I have had for some time now. It is partially inspired by Saw. I wrote it out in story form because it just seemed easier to explain this way.

"Shall I explain the game for you?" The woman standing over her said.

"Yes Mistress." Amanda said as she wiggled a little trying to get a bit more comfortable in the padded chair she was bound to.

"Hold this." Mistress Elizabeth said holding out a candle to her face. Amanda knew what she wanted her to do. She slowly openned her mouth and then bit down on the end of the candle. She cringed as a few drops of hot wax hit her body but managed not to breath to hard as to blow out the candle and leave the room in pitch black darkness. Amanda was afriad of the dark and Mistress Elizabeth knew it.

"You have been strapped to this chair and your hands are cuffed to a six digit padlock. You are good with numbers so on the wall you will find the twenty-seven two digit numbers. You must find the right three to open the padlock and exit through the door behind you." Amanda looked at her hands which where in tight bands which each had a metal half ring and where attached by the lock to a chain which hung in front of her. She glanced at the walls but couldn't really make out the numbers. Which she could barley see by the candle light.

"Your feet are taped to two peddles which will power the this light which you will need to see. Of course they are also attached to a device that is connected to the dildo I am sure you can feel inside your pussy. The harder you paddel the better you will be able to see but the faster the dildo will fuck you." She glaced at the light between her legs just above the paddles. She couldn't see the dildo but she could feel it partailly in her pussy just waiting for her to start peddling.

"Currently you will start with four inches but every ten minuites the didlo will go deeper until you are taking all tweleve inches if you can. So the longer you take the harder you will get fucked. You have one hour to solve this puzzle and escape." That meant that in fifty minuites after she started paddling she would be taking a dildo bigger then any cock she had ever had inside of her, Amanda wondered if she even could. Would she have to give up before her time even ran out.

"The combination holds special importance for you personally so you will need to go back and retrace your steps in order to see things in a diffrent light if you are to solve this puzzle in time." Mistress Elizabeth said with a grin. "I will leave you to it, your time will begin when you start peddling." And with that the Mistress left.
 
So, are you asking for opinions/interests from others? Help in developing ideas? Someone to write your story? What?
 
... Is there any intrest for such a story?
Not personally, but ...

Feedback and ideas. ...
If this is the start of a story, it means that there will have to be a great deal of explanation (very quickly) of why E wants to torture A in this particular fashion, and how A came to be E's victim. It is certainly attention grabbing as a beginning.

If, on the other hand, all the build-up comes first and this is a mid-point, then it poses a puzzle that the reader will want to solve for him/her-self before the victim does - like a detective novel where the reader wants to spot all the clues. If A knows something needed to solve the puzzle which the reader does not know at this point (e.g. A's first lover was born on 12/09/80) that is cheating on the part of the author.
 
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