Carnevil9
King of Jesters.
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There are four couples, all good friends.* The husbands are always pressuring the wives to do a swap, but the wives want nothing to do with it. But the husbands are relentless and keep bringing it up.
Finally the wives devise a plan to shut them up. They agree to the swap, but the husbands must be blindfolded, and never know who they swapped with. The hubbies jump at the offer. They all meet at the arranged time and place (one of their houses? Rental cabin? Doesn't really matter) and the husbands are well and truly blindfolded. Each husband is taken by the hand and led to a bedroom by one of the wives, where they undress each other and then fuck like insane bunnies for several hours. Then the wives depart back to the living room.
The point of view would hop from one husband's head to another, as they enjoy the strange sex, totally different from their usual married couple sex, and at the same time, try to figure out which wife they are fucking. They all have trouble figuring it out.
In the end, we find out that each husband was actually fucking his own wife, but the wives were doing their best to behave like they imagined each of the other women would. It allows the wives as well as the husbands to break out of their ruts and really get into it.
I imagine most readers would figure out the "twist" long before the end, but I think it could still be a fun story. I'm not likely to write it, so, free to a good home.
*maybe three couples would be easier to handle from an author's standpoint?
Finally the wives devise a plan to shut them up. They agree to the swap, but the husbands must be blindfolded, and never know who they swapped with. The hubbies jump at the offer. They all meet at the arranged time and place (one of their houses? Rental cabin? Doesn't really matter) and the husbands are well and truly blindfolded. Each husband is taken by the hand and led to a bedroom by one of the wives, where they undress each other and then fuck like insane bunnies for several hours. Then the wives depart back to the living room.
The point of view would hop from one husband's head to another, as they enjoy the strange sex, totally different from their usual married couple sex, and at the same time, try to figure out which wife they are fucking. They all have trouble figuring it out.
In the end, we find out that each husband was actually fucking his own wife, but the wives were doing their best to behave like they imagined each of the other women would. It allows the wives as well as the husbands to break out of their ruts and really get into it.
I imagine most readers would figure out the "twist" long before the end, but I think it could still be a fun story. I'm not likely to write it, so, free to a good home.
*maybe three couples would be easier to handle from an author's standpoint?