Bilquis-esque character

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I know that succubi are a well tread theme here at Literotica, but I have a story idea that I hope is pretty fresh.

To get to the point, though, I was thinking about feeding methods of the succubus that I might use in the story. Bilquis, from Neil Gaiman's excellent novel American Gods struck me as a pretty fresh take on it (not that the idea is originally his, just the most recent portrayal).
What I'd like to know is how you think a character of Bilquis' methods might be received by Literotica readers. Please let me know.

P.S. If you haven't read American Gods, shame on you! It really is a great read.
 
Please illuminate us who havent read that book yet

In the novel, Bilquis is a L.A. streetwalker who was once the queen of Sheba (yes, that one). In addition to turning tricks to make a buck, she also has the ability to discern the type of man who will worship her in exchange for sex.
She induces the poor soul into going through the ritual: turning off the lights, lighting the candle, and praying to her while she screws him. After he orgasms, she, quiet literally, draws him up into her vagina and into oblivion. As she puts it, he's 'gone away'.

What interests me about the story is this
A. the worship aspect of it, the discreet little ceremony the victim performs before the deed.
B. the visceral, almost out-of-body experience the man has as she firmly pushes him into her, and into the next life.

What I don't know is how such themes would be received by the literotica crowd. How popular are tales involving succubi, what do folks look for when they read such a story. Things like this.

Thanks!
 
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