Big muscle Lesbian takes college student as lover

[hfernandez1983]

Hi,

A new idea in my head. A big beefy muscled Lesbian takes in a young 19 or 20 year old female college student as a lover and slowly starts to push her boundaries for sex. First couple of encounters between them are nice and sweet with some strapon action. But then she makes the college student have sex in public places and even takes her to a dungeon to dominate her.

Also one day the girls mother suddenly arrives and our beefy Lesbian begins an affair with the mother as well. But eventually the muscled Lesbian choose the young girl. I want to write it in with both kink and romance themes.

What do you guys think....

 

[Carnevil9]

Hi,

A new idea in my head. A big beefy muscled Lesbian takes in a young 19 or 20 year old female college student as a lover and slowly starts to push her boundaries for sex. First couple of encounters between them are nice and sweet with some strapon action. But then she makes the college student have sex in public places and even takes her to a dungeon to dominate her.

Also one day the girls mother suddenly arrives and our beefy Lesbian begins an affair with the mother as well. But eventually the muscled Lesbian choose the young girl. I want to write it in with both kink and romance themes.

What do you guys think....

Sounds like it will need to be a long story to do it justice. That tends to discourage some readers (like me). But that's not a reason not to write it. Just don't expect it to be a blockbuster.

On the other hand, I could be way off. If you hook them well enough with the first page, you might haul in plenty of readers. Either way, I say go for it. It's got plenty of potential for both sexy action and existential drama.

 

[hfernandez1983]

thanks!

well I wont post the entire thing together. my plan is to write the story in parts with illustrations of all characters involved in sexual scenarios.

I can understand that a lot of readers get put off with a huge story or something thats doesnt look engaging in the first page itself. But I will do my best to make it as engaging as possible.

 

[kykyle35]

A possible story twist for your story

I love the general idea for your story, but how about making the college student straight at the start of the story, and have the big muscle lesbian seduce her and gradually take more control of the college student as the story progresses.

 

[secretLace]

Always liked muscles and lesbians so I would be your biggest fan.

Maybe the tiny elfin Annie is being robbed when powerful Athena swoops in and saves her? Annie feels safe with the tall muscular woman and is seduced partially due to her inexperience. When the muscular hands mauls her ass and she is being lifted of the ground as she feels the a big finger start to probe and caress her though her panties.

First time is the firm but gentle time and she is hooked on the orgasms she receives. Athena then takes control of what she should wear and even do dirty things with her in public.

That's where my dreams went fast at least