Big Bad Karma

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Sep 17, 2002
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Hey all,

So it has been ages. Life happened and I totally lost my passion for writing for a while. But recently I've been craving the written word more and more and decided to pick up my old novel and start writing again. I actually got a lot further in the last month than I ever did before and am up to about 25000 words. Act 1 is done and I'm moving into the first half of Act 2. I've got a skeleton outline and everything, so not just writing by the seat of my pants anymore. The original is still on here under my user name, (with the little red 'H' for hot next to it! So proud!) but it underwent a lot of editing and revision, and I could really use a critique partner or two. You know, someone to be brutally honest with me and tell me when it sucks, or when I use the word 'realize' or 'felt' or 'suddenly' way too much (because I do!), or when there is a huge gaping plot hole that I totally missed, etc.

Anyways, it is a paranormal romance novel featuring a witch, a werewolf, and a demon (oh my!). Feel free to check out the original, but again, there have been several changes, and I think it is really coming together. Maybe we could do a swap and critique each others' works, or if you just want to read my stuff, that's fine, too.

Thanks in advance!
DGN
 
Just wanted to say, that I have the same problem with those three words! 'felt' in particular is such a feeble verb , yet it just keeps infesting my writing !
 
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