Bi swingers

[Curious4bottom]

I have an idea for a story where it starts with my wife and I hooking up with our married friends several times. Each time we go a little further (women fuck each other, swap oral with each others spouses, fuck each others spouses). Finally the wives comment that they think we both wanna do each other. We both deny it, but later when we're alone drinking together we talk about it, and we end up blowing each other and he fucks me.

 

[sirhugs]

natural sequel where you let the wives in on it, gently, just licking his cock as he fucks your wife while she eats his.

 

[Carnevil9]

I have a half-written story (one of zillions) with two couples where the wives do each other while the husbands watch, then insist that the husbands do each other before they are willing to do the other husbands. Each husband really, really wants to fuck the other wife, so they agree to it. Hesitatingly at first, then gradually getting into it.

I'm finding it very difficult to write!

 

[allnitediner]

hooking up with our married friends several times. Each time we go a little further

I did a 5 part series like that only it's more of a love story. The group sex develops slowly because one of the women has a deep aversion to swinging.

https://www.literotica.com/s/new-friends-and-so-much-more-ch-01-1

 

[sirhugs]

I have a half-written story (one of zillions) with two couples where the wives do each other while the husbands watch, then insist that the husbands do each other before they are willing to do the other husbands. Each husband really, really wants to fuck the other wife, so they agree to it. Hesitatingly at first, then gradually getting into it.

I'm finding it very difficult to write!

first or third person?

 

[Carnevil9]

first or third person?

I'm writing it third person, but with alternating viewpoints. (Or "Tolkien style" as I call it in my head.) Each of the participants has a different personality and different goals, and I want to explore them all equally.

 

[sirhugs]

I'm writing it third person, but with alternating viewpoints. (Or "Tolkien style" as I call it in my head.) Each of the participants has a different personality and different goals, and I want to explore them all equally.

That IS a challenge!

 

[Hypoxia]

In my A Taste of Incest - Jasmine two male cousins are doing two sisters who are doing each other and insist the guys follow suit if they want to get any more. Much slurping ensues. Fun fun fun. But I don't really follow up on that. I have some sketches for JASMINE II that elaborate. Damn, I need to start writing again!

 

[hubbyluvinwife]

Much slurping is always a good thing, in a story or elsewhere !

 

[sirhugs]

Much slurping is always a good thing, in a story or elsewhere !

munch slurping too!

 

[Carnevil9]

Okay, I finally finished this story and it went live today.

The story isn't much, it's basically just four people having sex, because they can. But I wrote it as an experiment in viewpoint-shifting. That is, it's in third person, but I hop from head to head, trying to show what each one is feeling and thinking as the story progresses. I'm not sure if I succeeded or not. It was meant to flow, but I'm afraid it might come off as too clunky. If anyone feels like checking it out and letting me know where I went wrong, I'd appreciate it.

Here's the link: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-swap-5