I've been writing for years, unthankfully I got out of story writing about a decade ago, I decided to start up again and see how my writings would be taken in this day an age by a younger and in some cases more jaded crowd.
As I said it has been a decade since I've written so bare that in mind, and although that is true, I will say one criticism that people here will pick up or may if they are grammatically adept is that in some cases my tenses slips... it is part of the story, and it is there for a reason... so bare with it.
It may get confusing at times, at least I hope it doesn't... but if people are going to leave feedback on the story itself, please do so in a constructive manner, and not a destructive... it will be deleted.
Between Armageddon & a Hard Place Ch. 01
As I said it has been a decade since I've written so bare that in mind, and although that is true, I will say one criticism that people here will pick up or may if they are grammatically adept is that in some cases my tenses slips... it is part of the story, and it is there for a reason... so bare with it.
It may get confusing at times, at least I hope it doesn't... but if people are going to leave feedback on the story itself, please do so in a constructive manner, and not a destructive... it will be deleted.
Between Armageddon & a Hard Place Ch. 01
