Betrayal

[BlackSnake]

Mother finds out that her daughter and new husband are having an affair. She finds that she is not the only one that could be hurt by the affair, her daughter's fiance'. The mother decides to cover up the affair and allows herself to be swept up in the same game with her daughter's fiance'. Fantasies are revealed as the mother falls for her daughter's man.

 

[snooper]

One possible twist would be if the daughter's fiancé were the new husband's son, and that is how her mum met his dad.

 

[BlackSnake]

One possible twist would be if the daughter's fiancé were the new husband's son, and that is how her mum met his dad.

Very interesting, I like it.

 

[Another_Bad_Girl]

I would love to see this done

 

[Tylow]

Yeah i like the sound of this

 

[markkk]

nice..

 

[BlackSnake]

I have submitted two parts to the same story Ch 1 & 2 about a man having an affair with his stepdaughter. No boyfriend yet. May introduce a son who has the hots for his stepmother. All the affairs are hidden, just hints of knowledge.

 

[sirhugs]

One possible twist would be if the daughter's fiancé were the new husband's son, and that is how her mum met his dad.

and at the end, do they swap mates for good? Or end up in a big incestuous foursome?

 

[BlackSnake]

and at the end, do they swap mates for good? Or end up in a big incestuous foursome?

I'm working on chapter 3 right now. The stepdad is trying to find away to bring his love for both his wife and her daughter to the surface without destroying everything. The mother often displays her carefree spirit, but its yet to be seen how far she is willing to take it. But, I think that the affair will continue without the mother knowing. As it is, the mother is happy that her new husband gets alone well with her daughter.

Do you think the story will surfer if the person speaking changes. It is written in the first person.

 

[sirhugs]

I'm working on chapter 3 right now. The stepdad is trying to find away to bring his love for both his wife and her daughter to the surface without destroying everything. The mother often displays her carefree spirit, but its yet to be seen how far she is willing to take it. But, I think that the affair will continue without the mother knowing. As it is, the mother is happy that her new husband gets alone well with her daughter.

Do you think the story will surfer if the person speaking changes. It is written in the first person.

I personally stop reading a story if it shifts voices- I find it distracting or cofusing.

 

[BlackSnake]

I personally stop reading a story if it shifts voices- I find it distracting or cofusing.

Yeah, that's what I hated about the "Sleeping Beauty" book series.