Fortressa99
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How time flies. It's been nine months since I published the first chapter of my story and I finally have a decent version of chapter two.
I hated the first draft and tried a different angle, flipping from FL pov to ML pov. Which I liked better but I may not be a good enough writer to pull off. I really need some fresh eyes.
Anyone interested, I prefer Google docs but can change formats as needed.
First chapter is here: https://literotica.com/s/wickedness-2
TIA, Fortressa.
I hated the first draft and tried a different angle, flipping from FL pov to ML pov. Which I liked better but I may not be a good enough writer to pull off. I really need some fresh eyes.
Anyone interested, I prefer Google docs but can change formats as needed.
First chapter is here: https://literotica.com/s/wickedness-2
TIA, Fortressa.
