Beta reader wanted

[angelicminx]

I finally finished writing Chapter 2 of Now and Forever. I'm concerned about a few parts of it, and I need to know if I should change it, or if it's just my own criticism getting in the way.

Thanks in advance, y'all!

 

[angelicminx]

Wow! Nobody wants to read for me?

 

[flavortang]

I'll read!

 

[CeriseNoire]

Wow! Nobody wants to read for me?

Depends what you need. If it's just proofing and such, I can handle that.

 

[angelicminx]

Depends what you need. If it's just proofing and such, I can handle that.

Just a basic feel for the story. If it 'feels' like something's missing, or too over the top, cheesy dialogue... that kind of thing. Reader impression.


Flavortang and Cerise: It's a little over 4500 words. I can send it either PM or email. Let me know, via PM, which you would prefer? Thank you both!

ETA: I'll be gone most of today, but I should be back this evening.

 

[deathlynx]

If you're just looking for a beta reader, I can certainly help out there! I'm not the best with gramar, but I'm getting a little better at it...but I'm really good with spotting flow issues, awkward sentences, and continuity errors...

 

[angelicminx]

If you're just looking for a beta reader, I can certainly help out there! I'm not the best with gramar, but I'm getting a little better at it...but I'm really good with spotting flow issues, awkward sentences, and continuity errors...

Thank you!

 

[deathlynx]

Thank you!

Not a problem at all! And I sent you a PM with my email addy

 

[HappyLlama]

I'm a better reader than I used to be.

How good do I have to be?