CiaoSteve
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Hi all,
Don't normally do this, but I am looking for somebody to read my entry for the Halloween Contest to see if the plotline is too far fetched or not.
Hopefully grammar and story flow is OK, but I sometimes miss something. I am looking to know if you can buy into and enjoy the storyline.
It is 10k words, involves a young witch going trick or treating who decides to have some fun with a disbelieving house owner (a feisty buxom blonde). There's an enchanted dress, an equally enchanted vibrator, and several orgasms... the unsuspecting woman is called Jessica Cummings after all.
If you are interested please PM me and I will send you the text. I am happy to reciprocate.
Thanks,
Steve
Don't normally do this, but I am looking for somebody to read my entry for the Halloween Contest to see if the plotline is too far fetched or not.
Hopefully grammar and story flow is OK, but I sometimes miss something. I am looking to know if you can buy into and enjoy the storyline.
It is 10k words, involves a young witch going trick or treating who decides to have some fun with a disbelieving house owner (a feisty buxom blonde). There's an enchanted dress, an equally enchanted vibrator, and several orgasms... the unsuspecting woman is called Jessica Cummings after all.
If you are interested please PM me and I will send you the text. I am happy to reciprocate.
Thanks,
Steve
