Beta Reader request for Cold War Espionage lesbian erotica

[Jackie.Hikaru]

I have a ~21K word story originally planned for the Summer Lovin' contest, but given the subject, tried my best to repurpose for the 'Ode to Mickey Spillane' contest.

As the title suggests, it has espionage. Lesbian sex. Set in Europe during the Cold War. It's a worm's eye view story of a mole hunt.

I would love to have a reader who's into lesbian stories, spy stories, and noir to give it a read and tell me if it hits the marks, or of it doesn't (more likely the case), give me some good feedback on how to make it better.
Thanks!

 

[HeyAll]

I love those themes. This response might be late. If not, message me, but I can only give it a quick look, if you're interested.

 

[Jackie.Hikaru]

Hi heyall,
Thanks for the offer. I guess I should've posted here that I already found an editor... already submitted to publish, but if you're interested, I can let you know when the story is out!

 

[DreamingOfMyEx]

I really look forward to reading this story!!!

 

[Jackie.Hikaru]

The story is live now if you wanna read it. https://www.literotica.com/s/kirby-and-the-spy
I hope you all enjoy it!