Beta Reader for feminist fantasy romance

NaokoSmith

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I'm currently posting the chapters of an epic fantasy romance novel, the first in a big series of novels and novellas, on here. I have been working on the damn thing for years, and this was its final chance. The first chapters had a mixed reception but I have had some great feedback and feel very encouraged by comments like this on the later chapters:

Great story is getting even better.

Once you're finished, and you get it polished up, this is really going to be something.

Stellar!
I check every day for an update. . ...The story is so rich with nuances. .... I really appreciate reading a story where the ladies have agency of their own.

Fans tell me later chapters are much better written than the early ones. I am re-writing the early chapters and now need an experienced Beta-reader to tell me if I'm finally on the right track with them. I won't post a link to the chapters here, as I'd rather send you the new versions of the first chapters. I would be very grateful for some help.

:):heart:
 
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