Beta Reader for a Swinger story

Lifestyle66

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I have seven chapters published of my "Lifestyle" series of stories about a swinger couple in which I'm learning to write (as an amateur). Most of the chapters are rated over 4, with the LW one now 1-scraped to achieve a 3.31.

Reading those first 7 chapters shouldn't be necessary to pick up this story at #8. I try to write in background explanations of anything from the past needed to continue the story.

I have Chapters 8 and 9 combined into one ready to post, consisting of 17,400 words, and will be posted in the Group Sex category.

Chapter 8 has a scene where a secondary couple tries to join a sex club.
Chapter 9 is about the main couple with a public BJ scene, and stay overnight with two other couples prior to a house party (continued in Chapter 10.)

Since I receive no other constructive comments on the quality of the writing or the plot, I would appreciate someone Beta reading these so I can try to improve the quality.

If interested, PM me with your e-mail address and preferred format.
 
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