Beta Reader - Daddy/daughter Incest Story

[RainierWriterII]

Greetings,

I'm currently working on a consensual Daddy/daughter incest story, and it's getting quite long. The end is in sight, but it currently stands at over 20,000 words (with hopefully no more than 2,000 to go).

I personally believe most folks don't just jump into an incestuous relationship, so I like background and development; however I may have gone overboard. I would love a second set of eyes to see if I'm on the right track. I try to write for myself, but understand the needs of the audience, so I'm wondering if it's too long, boring, repetitious, etc. Should anything be removed, changed, added?

I'm hoping for a female perspective, as it's told mostly from the daughter's point of view. So, if any woman is willing to review a nearly complete incest story, and offer feedback, please let me know.

Thanks in advance!

RWII

 

[SimonDoom]

Greetings,

I'm currently working on a consensual Daddy/daughter incest story, and it's getting quite long. The end is in sight, but it currently stands at over 20,000 words (with hopefully no more than 2,000 to go).

I personally believe most folks don't just jump into an incestuous relationship, so I like background and development; however I may have gone overboard. I would love a second set of eyes to see if I'm on the right track. I try to write for myself, but understand the needs of the audience, so I'm wondering if it's too long, boring, repetitious, etc. Should anything be removed, changed, added?

I'm hoping for a female perspective, as it's told mostly from the daughter's point of view. So, if any woman is willing to review a nearly complete incest story, and offer feedback, please let me know.

Thanks in advance!

RWII

22,000 words isn't that long by Literotica standards. That's about 6 Literotica pages. Many, many incest stories do well at that length.

 

[BelleCanzuto]

There is an Editor's Forum where you can ask for editors and beta-readers.

The OP did post there first. Theirs is the next post after mine, and they've both been up almost two days with no responses.

 

[RainierWriterII]

The AH is the place for writers; to complain about beta-reading / editing and the lack of volunteers. Not to bother other writers (from which many probably have the same problems) with requests about editing and beta-reading..

I was not aware a request of this nature would bother other writers. Sorry for any inconvenience this post may have caused.