Beta Read/Edit

[alextasy]

I need a read-through on a 6800 word LW story with a non-cuck HEA ending (although some trollers might object to certain cuck-ish elements early in the tale). I'm most interested to verify continuity and cohesion of the story elements. This shouldn't need anything more than minimal grammatical editing, if any. For reasons that will become obvious when you read it, I would prefer someone who is familiar with the most popular LW writers.

Anyone interested?

=Alextasy

 

[C3P0R2D2]

Hey Alextasy,

LW is my favorite category. I would be willing to read the story and give you the asked feedback. Of course it's almost X- mas so I can't guarantee a fast turn around, but should be finished in a week or so.

With Regards,

C3P0R2D2