Best story I ever read...

footlongish

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.. was about a fiance who needed money and took up a job as a male stripper for various parties. He and his buddy get called to one party where they tease and get the women wild. Meanwhile the bride and the maid of honor go to bedrooms and get ready to be fucked. As the party winds down, the two strippers go to the bedrooms to fuck the bride and the maid. The guy fucks the maid and then asks her about the wedding, only to find out it is his own. He bursts into the other bedroom just as his buddy puts his load into his wife to be.

Imagine bursting into that room seeing your bride to be spread on the bed with cum running out of her pussy from your buddy and you've just fucked the maid of honor and teased your inlaws to be.
 
footlongish said:
.. was about a fiance who needed money and took up a job as a male stripper for various parties. He and his buddy get called to one party where they tease and get the women wild. Meanwhile the bride and the maid of honor go to bedrooms and get ready to be fucked. As the party winds down, the two strippers go to the bedrooms to fuck the bride and the maid. The guy fucks the maid and then asks her about the wedding, only to find out it is his own. He bursts into the other bedroom just as his buddy puts his load into his wife to be.

Imagine bursting into that room seeing your bride to be spread on the bed with cum running out of her pussy from your buddy and you've just fucked the maid of honor and teased your inlaws to be.

I suspect the improbubility quotient for this runs somewhere aound 10,000,000,000 on a scale of 1 to 10. It just really doesn't make any sense that he recognizes no one at the party and that his "friend" wouldn't recognize the wife to be either. I doubt I could even think about writing a story unless there was some way of making it sound plausible.
 
If I were a guy and my fiance fucked the first stripper that came along; the wedding would be off.
 
"If I were a guy and my fiance fucked the first stripper that came along; the wedding would be off."

I agree. But I think I'd jump her and take sloppy seconds first. I'd have a whole pile of mixed feelings, of course.

I think the story is plausible. Ever been to a wedding where the couple is in another city far from their families ? I've gone to weddings where the bride or groom meet the inlaws for the first time.
 
footlongish said:
... I think the story is plausible. Ever been to a wedding where the couple is in another city far from their families ? I've gone to weddings where the bride or groom meet the inlaws for the first time.
In some places even the bride has not met the groom before the wedding day. (See Fiddler on the Roof)
 
Very improbable without alot of creative thought. The area where you can marry someone and not meet them before, the few that are still around of course, there is no bachelorette party. To those people, a woman is only to make meals, keep the house clean and give their husband sons. Hrrrmmm, pretty sure the sons part is a wanted thing. :rolleyes:
 
Hey footlongish, any chance that you might remember where you found this story, or what the name was? It sounds rather interesting to me. :)
 
I think it was in a porn magazine. I haven't read many porn magazines over the years, so maybe Penthouse, about 1990. I think it was in my roommates porn stash.
 
emap said:
Very improbable without alot of creative thought. The area where you can marry someone and not meet them before, the few that are still around of course, there is no bachelorette party. To those people, a woman is only to make meals, keep the house clean and give their husband sons. Hrrrmmm, pretty sure the sons part is a wanted thing. :rolleyes:
Believe me, you are so wrong about the orthodox Jewish community. The women RULE there - not up front as boss man, but in back as the hidden controllers.
 
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