Gotta love that scene where she’s being held up, completely off the ground, her back to the black guys torso, his forearms held beneath her knees – completely spread and vulnerable to a room full of naked ……(no better yet, it was a steamy shower!) strangers (and Firemen/women are in better shape than most living humans. Trust me, it’s VERY difficult to get a gig as a Fire’person’) And ‘Stubby’ moves into her, while she’s held up prone – and LOVING it. Yup, that works for me……..
Special note: I was VERY sorry to see the ‘Return to the Womb’ series not continue. That had serious potential. (What happened man?! You were really searching the mentality, I thought. And the mother thing could have busted bars off windows of confinement. It could have gone SEVERAL different ways. It offered something other than ‘the usual’. Truly sorry to see that ditched. (And I felt the woman in the story magnetic – but I’d never stay in that closet man!! Hehe he)
I think that would have to go to Xxplorher for his story, "Wrong Number." The reader could get right into those characters and feel the sexual needs. He is a wonderful writer. One that I will always respect.