best friends/ mystery man

[jack30341]

Hi,

I would greatly appreciate any and all constructive feedback to the 2 stories referenced above that I've recently written and that are on Literotica.

I wound up spending hours and hours trying to get these presentable, and I'd really like to improve.

Thanks,

Jack30341

 

[carsonshepherd]

try posting a link on the story feedback board. The Story Discussion Circle is a give and recieve critique system where you need to sign up to have your story critiqued, after reviewing 2 others. Feel free to sign up on the first thread of this board, after which you will be put in the queue to have your story put up for reviews.