Excalibur541
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I have an idea for a story and need some feedback/suggestions.
A viscious barbarian/mercenary goes on a mission to break into a harem to kidnap the prince's most beautiful and talented concubine in order to make her his own personal slave. Unfortunately his plan is foiled when he himself is captured inside the palace. The concubine who was the intended victim of his kidnapping hears of his capture and his plot. She's amused and flattered by his pursuit of her and decides to pay him a little visit.
She goes to the dungeon where he's been stripped naked with his bulging arms and legs chained to the wall; his body somewhat beaten and lashed. The next day he is to be sent to a ship to be chained to an oar and made a galley slave for life. She wears a necklace; the key to his manacles at the end of it, resting against her breasts.
She walks about him, speaking to him, gloating at his failure while enticing him. She laughs in his face at how he intended to make her a slave and now he himself is in chains. He becomes infuriated as he cannot touch her.
She then begins to belly dance before him, slowly and seductively. She's long black haired, dark-skinned and voluptuous (a Salma Hayek look). She dances near to him as he pulls at the chains desperate to touch her. She does a strip tease while she giggles and teases him mercilessly with her body as the key rests against her huge jiggling breasts. She then kneels by his raging erection and begins to torment him some more as she performs some belly dance floor work within feet of him.
I can't decide if she should then pleasure and free him or just torment him and then allow him to be sent to the galleys; forever to dream and lust for her as he sits naked and in chains; pulling the heavy oar while under the whip.
A viscious barbarian/mercenary goes on a mission to break into a harem to kidnap the prince's most beautiful and talented concubine in order to make her his own personal slave. Unfortunately his plan is foiled when he himself is captured inside the palace. The concubine who was the intended victim of his kidnapping hears of his capture and his plot. She's amused and flattered by his pursuit of her and decides to pay him a little visit.
She goes to the dungeon where he's been stripped naked with his bulging arms and legs chained to the wall; his body somewhat beaten and lashed. The next day he is to be sent to a ship to be chained to an oar and made a galley slave for life. She wears a necklace; the key to his manacles at the end of it, resting against her breasts.
She walks about him, speaking to him, gloating at his failure while enticing him. She laughs in his face at how he intended to make her a slave and now he himself is in chains. He becomes infuriated as he cannot touch her.
She then begins to belly dance before him, slowly and seductively. She's long black haired, dark-skinned and voluptuous (a Salma Hayek look). She dances near to him as he pulls at the chains desperate to touch her. She does a strip tease while she giggles and teases him mercilessly with her body as the key rests against her huge jiggling breasts. She then kneels by his raging erection and begins to torment him some more as she performs some belly dance floor work within feet of him.
I can't decide if she should then pleasure and free him or just torment him and then allow him to be sent to the galleys; forever to dream and lust for her as he sits naked and in chains; pulling the heavy oar while under the whip.
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