Bellhop story idea

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24 year old bellhop Mathew Parks, works at the Carington Boton hotel, a five star national chain. He works there to pay off his college debt, hes qualified for better jobs but cant find a better one in this economy. But mathew is happy because he's doing what he loves. He studied hotel management all the way into post grad studies, it felt natural to him. Like it was in his blood.

One day he's picked for management training. It starts with butler training. A month after passing everything he's promoted to the presidential suite. A few days later a special guest checks in. Arthur Carington the 3rd.

He's in the room in secret re writing his will with attorneys. After a feud with his spoiled kids.
He takes a likening to Mathew and his frank nature. Mathew reminds Arthur of himself. Arthur ends up extending his stay at the hotel for a week. A week of moral quizez and chess with Mathew.

Arthur leaves and everything goes back to normal for Mathew. One night going out with the staff Mathew is hit on by a babe, that looks familliar. She wants to take him back to her place but Mathew insists his is loser. He is taken by her and fucks her to new levels leaving a surprised smile on her face.

In the morning he wakes up strapped to his bed. Two familiar looking men are standing over the bed.
They are Arthur Carringtons sons. Arthur Carrington died last night. He left the majority of his $4 billion dollar fortune to Matthew, unknown to Mathew.

The Carrington brothers think it'll be hard to convince Matthew to surrender his stake in the hotels, but he agrees to sign whatever, if they let him free. Hereing this the girl from last night who is Jessica Carington Arthurs grandaughter, decides to free him when her dad and uncle leave the bedroomget the lawyer for the papers. She asks Mathew if he really doesn't want the money. He says it isn't his to want. Mathews frank honest words reminds her of her grandpa. Her dad had convinced her to help them but now shes changed her mind. After all her grandpa left the family near $2 billion dollars. Jesica frees Mathew and escapes with him.
 
Incest probably

While battling the non contest clause of Authors will. The Carrington sons discover a letter. Author Carrington intended it for Mathew.

In it Arthur Carington admits that he cheated on his wife of fifty four years. His wife hellen Carington died a year ago. 23 years ago they separated after a fight. In that moment he had a fling with a waitress Isabel Parks. Mathews mother.

Mathew is Arthur's son. Mathew is Jessica's niece. So this incest now.
 
Well, OK, but ???? Why don't you just A, write it up and submit it, and/or B, post this to the separate forum designed for story ideas?

I've written several hell hop stories (have even had a bell hop or two myself), but this is a different hook for me. It would be interesting to see it written up.
 
Well, OK, but ???? Why don't you just A, write it up and submit it, and/or B, post this to the separate forum designed for story ideas?

I've written several hell hop stories (have even had a bell hop or two myself), but this is a different hook for me. It would be interesting to see it written up.

Did you read the "bellhop" story idea? Because its no simply just that.
 
Yes, I did. To me, it was simply that. And we have a forum for that. You didn't really ask any sort of question about it or make any sort of comment on it. What were you expecting in response? What you got was, yes, it reads like a story idea, so go ahead and do it.
 
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