Before We Go To Dinner...

[Eddie]

Hello, thank you for clicking on my topic. I am the author of "Before we go to dinner..." I am most interested in hearing your opinions of my short story.

I have read many stories from Literotica, but many times the stories weren't exactly how I would have liked them to go. Not an insult to the author, just my own personal tastes. So I would imagine the story taking the direction that suited my own fantasy. After reading several stories, I began to get my own ideas for a short story.

A big purpose of pursuing sex and the actual act of sex itself, is to work towards the climax, right? Most stories I've read don't give enough credit towards the finale itself. At least not for my own personal fantasies. I wrote "Before we go to dinner..." with all the details I like to read in erotica. Everything from a kinky fantasy to the details describing the actual act itself.

I hadn't intended to publish this story. However, the more details I added to the work, the more turned on I got from reading it. I kept the story short and to the point. This is erotica I wanted the reader to be immersed in, immediately. Eventually, I really liked what I had written and wanted to share my thoughts with you.

I hope you enjoyed reading my story. I would appreciate your opinions of my work.


Thank you,

Eddie

[This message has been edited by Eddie (edited 12-15-1999).]

[This message has been edited by Eddie (edited 12-15-1999).]

 

[#1derfulGuy]

VERY GOOD STORY, EDDIE..........I feel the same way. Too often, I have read stories of "slutty housewives" or "teasing teens" and I wondered if there will ever be a story with a better idea and good ending? So that is where "THE BIRTHDAY BANG" and "HOUSE GUEST FROM HEAVEN" came into play. I don't like sad or "sucky" endings.
You did a great job elaborating on the act, as well as the prefix of the act itself. You kept the suspense going and led me to the climax (the story's climax that is, not the characters--LOL). Keep up the good work.

 

[Miranda]

Eddie, unfortunatly I didn't get a chance to read your story (I looked, I swear) But your whole situation and attitude is great...! It reminds me of something I heard Toni Morrison say: If there's a book you really want to read but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it. I'll keep looking for the story and will add comments on the actual story later...!

 

[Sbsbabyj]

Eddie your story was very well written and will have to agree it held my attention to the very end...for s first time you did great!