Beautiful wife

[Adultman]

There lived a King with his 4 wives and he had 4 sons. His eldest son(A) saw the beautiful girl (B)of another Emperor and fell in love at first sight of her(B). He (A)won the competition conducted by the Emperor and married his daughter(B) whom he(A) loved. The eldest son(A), along with his beautiful wife(B) and one brother(C), had been to the thick forest to see the beauty of nature as per the orders of the King, his father. There came a woman(D) from neighboring country and on seeing the eldest son(A) she(D) was attracted towards him(A). She(D) wanted to marry him(A). As he(A) did not accept her(D) proposal, she (D)asked his younger brother(C) to marry her(D). The younger brother(C) cut her(D) nose and sent her. She(D) went to her brother(E), a king of neighboring country, and informed him(E) about the beautiful wife(B) of the eldest man(A) in the forest. On hearing the beauty of the woman in forest, he(E) wanted to see her(B) and so he(E) went to the forest. He(E) saw her(B) beauty and loved her(B) and wanted to marry her(B). So he(E) took her(B) to his country along with him(E), using violence. The eldest son(A) searched his wife(B) all over the forest and neighboring countries with the help of friends and finally located her(B)in the neighboring country( of E). He (A)gathered an army and went there and fought with the army & man(E) who took his wife(B) and killed him(E). He(A) took his beautiful wife (B)along with him(A) to his country and lived there happily for a long time.

 

[i_would]

I got maybe halfway and then thoroughly got lost in the he and she parts. And I have the feeling I did quite well, getting that far. If that's disentangled there may be a story in it.

 

[Adultman]

I got maybe halfway and then thoroughly got lost in the he and she parts. And I have the feeling I did quite well, getting that far. If that's disentangled there may be a story in it.

The doubts of i Would is agreeable. In order to clear the doubts of "he" & "she", it is indicated now the English alphabets against each of "he" & "she".

 

[MatthewVett]

I don't think erotica should require a chart listing all of the characters in order to get through.

 

[Sean Renaud]

It's just a bit messy and hurt my soul but I think idea is sound.

 

[Adultman]

It's just a bit messy and hurt my soul but I think idea is sound.

Thank you Sean Renaud. I think I may rewrite the story with some names instead of "he" or "she" with added story of love

 

[Adultman]

I don't think erotica should require a chart listing all of the characters in order to get through.

I agree with you, MathewVett . I like to rewrite the story with names instead of "he" & "she" ,
with added story of love.