TabooTeller
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http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17882
Been thinking about commenting on this story for a while but finally got around to it. I can't send the writer, tvr , a copy of this since he doesn't seem to want comments but this is a good story and he has a bunch of others about the same couple. Only thing is he doesn't name the husband till story three and the wife even latter. The last one listed evednently about her being drugged and raped at work. She thought it was her husband until she saw she was bitten hard. Anyway Beach Surprise has a good set up and good description of a beach. Good sex too. Well written. I was going to suggest tvr write one with almost the same set up but this time her husband doesn't tell her its him an dso she thinks she is being raped. He decided its fun and doesn't tell her until the end. At that point she lays down poinst to her slit and says something about needing a good cum now. So get down there and use your mouth. The writer would be able to set it up and with his ablitity to describe settings it could be a good story. His choice I just thought it coudl be fun.
But this story and some of his others are worth reading.
TabooTeller
Been thinking about commenting on this story for a while but finally got around to it. I can't send the writer, tvr , a copy of this since he doesn't seem to want comments but this is a good story and he has a bunch of others about the same couple. Only thing is he doesn't name the husband till story three and the wife even latter. The last one listed evednently about her being drugged and raped at work. She thought it was her husband until she saw she was bitten hard. Anyway Beach Surprise has a good set up and good description of a beach. Good sex too. Well written. I was going to suggest tvr write one with almost the same set up but this time her husband doesn't tell her its him an dso she thinks she is being raped. He decided its fun and doesn't tell her until the end. At that point she lays down poinst to her slit and says something about needing a good cum now. So get down there and use your mouth. The writer would be able to set it up and with his ablitity to describe settings it could be a good story. His choice I just thought it coudl be fun.
But this story and some of his others are worth reading.
TabooTeller
