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Wolverine/Cyclops BDSM Fanfiction Feedback?
Hi everybody. I'm looking for feedback for my current ongoing x-men slash series. In a nutshell, Wolverine tops a distraught Cyclops. It's kinky as heck; and by the second chapter features bondage and medical play. So far, two chapters are up and two more are pending approval.
Author: heiflet
links:
Ch. 01- http://www.literotica.com/s/just-crossed-my-mind-ch-01
Ch. 02- http://www.literotica.com/s/just-crossed-my-mind-ch-02
category: Celebrity
I'm very thick skinned. I'd just like to make my writing better. Any feedback is appreciated.
Hi everybody. I'm looking for feedback for my current ongoing x-men slash series. In a nutshell, Wolverine tops a distraught Cyclops. It's kinky as heck; and by the second chapter features bondage and medical play. So far, two chapters are up and two more are pending approval.
Author: heiflet
links:
Ch. 01- http://www.literotica.com/s/just-crossed-my-mind-ch-01
Ch. 02- http://www.literotica.com/s/just-crossed-my-mind-ch-02
category: Celebrity
I'm very thick skinned. I'd just like to make my writing better. Any feedback is appreciated.
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