BDSM or Lesbian?

[SpicyPepper]

I posted my latest story as a BDSM, but it was approved under the Lesbian Love category and I'm not sure why. The only actual graphic sex is non-consent and done by males, even though the main character is in love with her best friend.

What do you think of my story?

Love in the Club


Also, I thought this public comment was hilarious and might actually write a silly story with these suggestions! It's too funny (even though it's rated at 0, damn trolls!) and I love how they spelt "haveing"...

Lesbian?????
08/02/08 by Anonymous in usa
Oh, I think you got something wrong. There was not much lesbianism going on in this story, This story was more about a dike haveing all of her gay friends rape a ninteen year old woman. She could go to the authorities and scream rape, but darn it, they cleaned her up. The best think she can do is stay away from this Joelle character. The only other thing she can do is get her staked out on her knees and hands and turn a pack of male dogs lose on her. She has to know when Joelle's period is and how she gets her staked out can be done with the help of friends or drugs. She should be in the shadows filming with sound, as Joelle begged the largest dog for more as he tied with her. Then she could take the film to a sleezeball and have him edit out the stakes and ropes before emailing it to all of Jolelle's friends and relatives. That would be a trip.

 

[The_Fractal_King]

Non-consentual sex wouldn't put it in BDSM anyway. That might have lead to recategorization.

I will read and comment when I get back from work.

 

[desertslave]

I think it definitely would have a better home in the BDSM category. Fun story!

The "there is some bad writers on this site" comment....gotta love a critic with bad grammar! ROFL

 

[The_Fractal_King]

Probably went in Lesbian because of the begining which is all about Kayla and Joelle's relationship and how it goes against Kayla's mother. Laurel's good but she probably doesn't have time to read all of every submission.

As for the story, I liked it. I prefer gentler stuff overall but the story is well written and descriptive. In terms of realism there's a problem with Kayla not being told what her safeword was for and not having an alternate she could use while unable to speak, but it didn't seem like an issue.

Kayla is a pretty good character but Joelle is a bit too one dimensional. I'd have liked to know more about who she was rather than just cast her as Kayla's Mistress and nothing more.

 

[bremerton6]

i can see same sex

I agree it should be in lesbian category it was all about the relationship between those two women; albeit that there was BDSM involved it was from the beginning when it was just the 2 of them.
I loved the story line it was VERY HOT

Will be looking for more from you.

Thank you,
Angel